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Reviewed By: Sasori-sama On: August 09, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your title needs to be capitalized, but other than that your story is pretty well written.
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Title: Sorry not signed in today
Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: August 08, 2006 22:56 CDT
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I like the odd turn in Hojo. I'm glad someone finally mad him bad...he's just one of those too good to be true guys in the manga. For having writers block your story is coming together great..I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: July 26, 2006 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great update! I can't wait to see how Sess is going to react to Hojo!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 07:38 CDT
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I have a feeling that this fic is going to rock out loud! lol I'm looking forward to the next chappie!
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Title: mnesai1
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting. I love how you have kept him in character. I always appreciate the Sess/Kag Sess/Oc pairings that are in the future. Your Sess; without saying anything about his feelings, seems somewhat innocent and curious. but yet matter of fact to the point..Hey, that's him. I hope he doesn't whip anybody at the club. That would be a hoot. Please update. I am thoroughly enjoying this.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 23:35 CDT
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Your story is really good....do you have any pairings? I think seeing Sess in a club is going to be funny. Update soon. Sorry I'm not logged in but for some reason it won't let me!
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