| "Scryed Askew" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Triser On: July 11, 2010 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot idea, but I wish you update soon so we can see what happens after the Medical Raid/Sneaking in to save Kanami. Ryuuho also didn't chase her because she was clinging to him, but her not caring about him thinks she is playing hard to get, is funny and easy to bash him. I want to read more!
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Title: Alter Alchemist
Reviewed By: Kazuma Elric On: November 20, 2008 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason I didn't give you straight 10s was due to a few "to"s in the places of "too"s, but honestly, I have to say this is the best fanfic I have ever read. The pairing is very original and happens to be one of my favorites and you really know how to show the affects of Cherise and Kazuma's relationship upon each other as well as the ripples of that one simple change throughout all of the plot and characters. Please, update as soon as you can, because from what I've read of other reviews on this story as well as my own interest in it... well I'm pretty sure... no I'm certain that this story has quite a few people following it and hanging on your every key press. P.S. I love the Ryuho bashing, early in the series I came to despise him, and seeing him (still in his cold, self-absorbed state) and being treated as he is and put under the situations he has been thrown into... well how to put it? It tickles me deeply. From writer to writer, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuYasha187 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story and Disgaea 2: Cursed Memories is a great game
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Reviewed By: ero-demon On: September 04, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is some great stuff!! What happans on part 2 of their date!!
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Reviewed By: Raman man On: September 03, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shell-bullet On: August 31, 2006 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's been awhile since I last reviewed. This is still one of the best stories I'v read. Update soon, I want to know what happens on part two of their date.
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile since I last updated I love this fic alot. update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Non-Euclidean_Geometeric_Shape On: August 29, 2006 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know if you hadn't mentioned that another fic pre-dated this one for the idea I'd have given ten all the way across. Although there is a definite lack of this pairing anyway, so... I think this is great, and exactly what fanfiction should be, different circumstances but limited/no Out Of Characterness. I'd say update as soon as you're able, but that'd be cliche and monotonous, so instead I ask you make the next update as wonderful as those before it. Man I'm long-winded today.
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Reviewed By: Shell-bullet On: August 26, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ON PART 2 OF THEIR DATE!!!!!!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. It was a bit short but nice nonetheless. Keep it up!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know I've already reviewed but this story is great and has so many possibilities I'm losing my mind trying to figure out what you're going to write next!! Update soon! Put us out of our misery!
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Please!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYasha187 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that good keep it up
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Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry if I sounded rude in my other review's I forgot that it takes time to make a good story. update soon.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a great story! Personally I always thought Ryuho was a pain in the @$$ and having him constantly pester Scheris for a date was a perfect way to spite Mr. emotionless and completely oblivious. This pairing rocks and its only amplified by your great writing! Keep it up and update soon!
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