Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it, Debbie, how do you do this? I've been compelled to read a handful of your fics and I don't even like Bleach. Anyway, overall I'm very, very impressed. Narrative is crisp and concise. Characterization is pretty deep considering how short this and other Bleach fics are. Descriptions where appropriate, are rich and get their point across quickly (none of those 20th century expositions here). Man, I'm thinking hard and I can't find anything to really critique. I don't know, I'd to see what you could do if you made your own very involved epic fanfic, but I mean that's more of a request than a critique. Hmmmm, well, actually the only thing I can pick on is that you do need to be somewhat familiar with Bleach in order to catch some of what you get at (in terms of references names and locations and such) since I did have to do some digging to understand who you were talking about. But then again, it's a Bleach fic so you're not required to fully explaining everything. Really, all I must confess your writing style far exceeds my own so I'm not sure if I can really credibly offer you any helpful feedback. So I guess, kudos and thanks for a great read!
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