| "Couple Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: couple trouble
Reviewed By: TENTEN! the same one as before^_^ On: September 13, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im like addicted to ur freakin fics! and im so happy that u made the latest one,PLEASE make a tad more narutohinata moments cause she liked died cause i havent heard from hinata for like three chapters!THEY R THE GREATEST!
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 08:43 CDT
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So what are you going to do about the pairings? Seems like Sasuke liked all the attention Sakura used to give him. Write more!!
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Title: couple trouble
Reviewed By: tenten On: September 07, 2006 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story...so write the next chapter! NOW! i read it during class at school and i damand that u write the next chapter..oh and include more hinata naruto moments k
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, your mean. and do the suk/kiba thing, oh and the jules emo dude.
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Reviewed By: cool dude On: August 10, 2006 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think u shoulnd't have kiba and sakura win by getting naruto and hinata to break up i think u should have them stay together even through the efforts of kiba and sakura and u should have sakura and kiba admit wat they were trying to say in the first place. But hav sasuke try and get sakura but he doesn;t kno y he wants to the only reason is that sakura is trying to get naruto and so on. : ) love the stoy cant stop reading
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Title: couple trouble
Reviewed By: cory On: August 10, 2006 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think u shoulnd't have kiba and sakura win by getting naruto and hinata to break up i think u should have them stay together even through the efforts of kiba and sakura and u should have sakura and kiba admit wat they were trying to say in the first place. But hav sasuke try and get sakura but he doesn;t kno y he wants to the only reason is that sakura is trying to get naruto and so on. : ) love the stoy cant stop reading
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna( too lazy to login) On: August 08, 2006 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing more. :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
What did kakashi do? Write more, please. If you are getting rid of this story, don't. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 15:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn strat i helped.and i never said Lulu was beter then Kadaj so I DON"T LIKE YO RITE NOW!(stiks tung out)
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is good,but what was with that chaper? I didn't get it. Oh, and read my fanfic. It's the my first one I written. It called In the Rain. Write more of your story.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first I AM NOT FAT,and that wos a good chapter but you did not get Kadaj rite but if you need to know wat he would do just ask.k with that sed Geany 101 over and out.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now it should get good and just to let you know you forgot to say that his hair is sholder lankth,if you dont rhen ppl think he looks like your huby,and he dus not look like my man
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Reviewed By: naruto maniac On: June 29, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was asome 2 thumbs up but to short and plz do a second one or tell me if you have one
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Reviewed By: Coleslaw. On: June 28, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Danielle!I love the chapters you showed me that you wrote!it`s oo original and creative.For a girl who doesn`t really like anime..Thanks for getting me into it! alksdjfo wuotuwljll ILOVEYOU -coleslaw
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Reviewed By: lena! On: June 26, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy you're doing really good at this. :] i like it. alot. :D
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