| "Aftershocks and Indemnify" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the quite the emotional roller coaster. I really enjoyed it. The pleasure, the pain, it was all present in this short but beautiful story. I may be jumping the gun, because I'm not sure if this is the last chapter. But it was really well written and I really good. I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 01:40 CDT
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hmm.. I wonder what part 2 will be like. I really enjoyed the first part! I am happy Kikyo let Inu be with Kagome! :o) Anyways, great job! I look forward to the second part!!!
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Title: ahhhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: Jalen On: June 26, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my buddha.....that wuz 1 of tha best stories i have ever read plz!! update soon.....i hate 2 admit it but that shit made me CRY!!!!!!!!.......i mean just fuckin tears.....but yea PLZ MAKE INUYASHA COME BACK..........I CANT STAND STORIES WITHOUT HIM!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mylady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 13:44 CDT
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i love the way your story goes so far, i only hope you give us a happy ending. I'm such a softy i like my happily ever after so please don´t keep us waiting too long for an update. Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 07:57 CDT
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I remember this fic from when you posted it previously and this chapter still made me cry. I can empathize with Kagome's heartache over the loss of her spouse and the need to carry on for the child. You did a good job of conveying that. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Happy Birthday and may you enjoy many more. And you're not old. You're just very very pregnant. Trust me, I've been both and there's a difference. (Good luck with that too!).
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 04:57 CDT
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! that was so sad :( HAPPY B-DAY
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 01:31 CDT
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I like your story! I do hope Inuyasha comes back somehow... It's just so tragic with Kagome and her child. I am wondering what's coming next! I like how you've left us all in the dark wondering what your next move it! I am eager to find out! Will Sesshoumaru play a role in this? Kouga..? *I hope not* Hmm.. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Also, Happy Birthday!!! and congrats on a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 25, 2006 00:47 CDT
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What an ass - Yes, I knew he would go, but, still, all of them say he owes nothing to the 'dead one' and he goes anyway. So, what's next? Training and a birth - Sess coming back? Kouga? are we going to see him? I'll be waiting. and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!(trust me, you are not old, I know, cause I am!!)
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: June 25, 2006 00:20 CDT
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really i do log on, i swear it! happy birthday! another chapter that had me bawling throughout. you have such a way with bringing out emotions. no one seems out of place character wise and i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IIIIII like it!!!
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Reviewed By: Kat - ladykaa28 On: June 23, 2006 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked this fic. Are you going to continue with it or was it just a one-shot? From what I ahve read this a great beginning.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like it is going to be just as great as your other works. What gets me about your stories is that some of them seem like plausible outcomes to the real story of Kagome and Inuyasha. I really hope that Kagome and Inuyasha will find a way to get their happy ending so that the clay bitch can go to hell by herself. I usually don't hate Kikyo; it is truly awaful how Naraku deceived the two of them and how Kikyo ended up dead because of it. But, in this story I truly can't wait to see her get whatever bad things are coming to her. She is truly despicable here. You've got me hooked again, LOL. I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had forgotten how much I enjoyed this story. I'm glad you are putting it up here where I have access during the day if I want to sneak a peak.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: June 23, 2006 08:35 CDT
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i love this story (and yes, you made me cry in the first chapter) i read this on the other site, even though it was undergoing severe loading problems and i'm excited to see it here. you bring so much emotion into this story.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this story is starting out good keep up the good work can't wait till the next chapter.
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