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Title: Lost Cadre Chapter 13
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still in the high quality of all the other chapters of this story. It is so captivating, just wish that it was posted faster as I am always impatient to know what happens next to Mingan and his little Pet. Each chapter makes us readers want more please, more. Tutyfrty aka GreenEyes
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Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I was so happy when i found out you updated my fav story. Loved the new chapter, espcially the Akando getting rejected part. Go Jolen! Can't wait for your next update...plz let it happen soon!
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Title: Knock, knock
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Just dropping by to nag er . . . encourage you to continue with this excellent story! Sending you creative vibes. :0)
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Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW omg this is my abosolute favorite ai no kusabi fanfic right now........plz right more! I cant wait 2 see wat happends to Mingan!
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Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous stuff. Best AnK I've read. I love what you've done with the regular cast, esp. Raoul. But your original characters are even better, and I'm rooting for Mingen and Sev to stay together forever. Oh, and MORE PLEASE!
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! You do passion and aggression so well!!!! Can't wait to read more. If this fic isn't complete, I may have to hunt you down and make you finish it! ;-)
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Title: A happy rediscovery!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the first to chapters, and realized that I'd read the early chapters of the ages ago and loved it! Can't wait to see the new chapters. This is such a good story.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I was just this story the other day and you finally updated it!! Squee! This is getting very exciting! Now his brother's there, double the hotness! LOL Zesiro likes twincess! XD maybe you should add some of that :D I had to go reread this fiction, but not that I minded i don't think I could get tired of it anyways. Please updates soon!-- oh i thought of it being a good idea for mprg. but no one really likes that..ahem but um yeah! I still like your story
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 10:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the wonderful Christmas present of another chapter to this great story! As well written and sensual as usual. Your description of the dance was wonderful. It made it very easy to visualize. Too bad it's not something we can see in person! I bet Raoul is in for an interesting night when he and Zesiro get home. It's nice to have everyone beginning to meet up. I can't wait to see what happens between Jolen and Akando when Jolen wakes up and finds out Akando has plans for him. I'm sure it will be interesting. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGAIN, excellent story, fantastic chapter, the dance was so vividly written. I hope that it will not take you too long to write the next chapter as I wait with bated breath for each chapter of any of your stories. Eventually I will turn blue from holding my breath but even blue I don't dance, I just read your stories with intense pleasure and a deep need for more please. As good as it ever was and more, how do you do it?. Trudy aka tutyfrty aka GreenEyes
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Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, the quality of your writing is superb. The story is addictive, and so well written. The characters are 3D and very interesting. Can't wait for more. tutyfrty aka GreenEyes from the Taming Riki site
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Title: YAY!!! *Glomp*
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm soooooooooooooooooooo sooooooo glad you updated! I've been dying to read more! though I was a bit confused on what markings on Mingen's back you were talking about but I guess I'll glance back in the chapts to look. Please update soon! I can't wait to read more
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGAIN! you have done it again, written an engrossing and highly entertaining part of a continuing story that I can't wait to see more of. I never want it to end. Great story, Extrememly well written! Trudy aka GreenEyes
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Title: Please update! :-(
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
!!! I've been waiting for a long time for updates!! can you please put up some! I really love the story! its so amazinly well written and i love your lemons!
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Reviewed By: Pugsley [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was extremely happy when I received the notice that you had posted another chapter for this story. I have been a fan of "The Lost Cadre" for quite sometime. I love your original characters. Especially Zesiro. He is so rich as a character. I love all of his little idiosyncrasy. He is amazing at how much his desire is to give and receive pleasure and he just keeps coming up with new ways to do so. Mingan and Sevilen are a wonderful pair. I hope all works out for them. I look forward to your next chapter and thank you for the latest one.
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