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Title: Ur Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! U have no idea. I check my email everyday and hope to God that there's an update from u. It's very difficult for some writers to keep the FAKE characters in character. Some see them in a different light then what they truly are. U have gotten everything correct. If Sanami Matoh ever wrote a FAKE manga like this, I truly believe it would be something like this. Anyway, on to the last chapter u wrote. I'm so glad Dee and the baby are ok. I'd cry if something bad happened lol (Loves Dee so much). Now that Ryo and Dee are back together, I can't wait to see what happens next! They are so much in love!!! Also, I CAN'T WAIT til Ryo is gonna proposes to Dee!! I can't wait til u update!! I hope it's soon!! Good luck with this story. I hope u stick with it. U r such a good writer!! Until next time, Ja ne!!! Also: Why aren't there more reviews? Good God ppl! Show some respect here! This author deserves more reviews for her work! DO IT NOW!!! :P
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 15:53 CDT
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I've been reading your fic for a while and decided to stop being stubborn and review. This is really REALY good fic. Like. . . .I"M SERIOUS!! Oh, My , Gosh!! I wish I could write this well!! And, you update more often then many writers. I can not wait until the next chapter comes up. Will Dee be alright?
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Reviewed By: abbyz j On: August 24, 2006 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED it it was a fab fic lol
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This is excellent. I've encountered very few mpreg FAKE fics before and I have got to say this is the best written one I have came across. You've even managed to keep all the characters "in character" which is hard for some authors. I can tell Dee and Ryo are very much in love. Even Dee and Bikky have a good relationship which is rare in many fics. I'm also impressed with how you explained how males can get pregnant. Very clever. You are very talented and I hope to be seeing more updates with this story. Good luck! Ja ne ^^
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Title: Impressed
Reviewed By: Kita&Subu-chan On: July 29, 2006 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! That was so great. You have to update soon! *drools* Please. I want more! (Yes, yes, no that we have that out of the way, I have to say I was truly impressed. I don't mind MPREG fics, though they're seldom my favorites. But this one was well thought out and very nicely done. Ryo and Dee were very in-character and the "carrier" bit was very neatly explained and thought out. I was impressed and will happily read more.) Kawaii! Subu-chan liked it too! Drinks for everyone! It's a party! Hey, Drake, JJ, stop making out in the corner and get over here! Party! (Down, rabid-fan-girl! Back!)
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Reviewed By: hoppA On: July 02, 2006 15:34 CDT
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I really really like it !!!...please update soon its an excelent fic
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Reviewed By: hnbgvfcx On: June 25, 2006 23:36 CDT
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That was unexpected. xD I was just waiting for a Dee mpreg, thank you.
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