| "The Jewel of Four Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 22:04 CDT
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I am still with you! Yay! T.T Wow it seems like forever. I liked the chapter a lot, I wonder what's gonna happen next! X3
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 22:12 CST
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Hey! I thought you handled that fantastically! Stop beating yourself over it when it was fine. Pshh. -_-''. ANYWAY, keep it up! and OH MY GOSH, I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE SAID THAT... SO UN-KAGOME-LIKE. But it was out of a huge fit of rage and anger so I guess it sort of couldn't be helped... but gah. >.< poor Inu
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: January 15, 2007 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... ~_~... it's 2:27 a.m here... I'm... very sleepy... ~_~... But... a review is what shall be typed. ~_~. HOLY FRIGGIN JEEZUS! GREAT CHAPTER!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!! >.< *head hits keyboard and is out cold* jhkjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
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Reviewed By: Shadowking2345 On: December 31, 2006 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good i think that you are the only person that wrote a story about kagome not comiing back for like a long time and that is cool, bc now it isn't corney and like oh my gosh she just popped up out of no where so good JOB and you better get chapter 10 through 13 ready you have to atleast make her come back and then the Kikyo incednet! Maybe put in there that kagome since she was revived with the sacrid jewel and the 4 souls that she now has some of the powers of the four souls and is like a goddess that would be really cool Oh well you did a really good job on it so any jsut giving ideas have a good one
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Twinkle On: October 08, 2006 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Thanks for updating! Now there's hope for poor Kagome. And we finally know just what upset her so much. Looking forward to next chapter!
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Title: How Depressing
Reviewed By: Twinkle On: August 31, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter. It was really depressing - poor InuYasha. He needs to be happy soon. Maybe next chapter? he he.
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Reviewed By: blah999999999999999999 On: August 22, 2006 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all i can say!it atill makes me wonder if theyll ever bring kagome bak....plzz update soon:)
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 19:15 CDT
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Wow, it seems as though Inu is giving up a bit. Not that I blame him with the pain he is going through. It is nice to see the little bit of hope through Sango and Miroku's eyes. Paiful chappie, I hope Inu gets some respite from his pain soon. Thanks!
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Title: blaj
Reviewed By: blaj On: July 26, 2006 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
blaj
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was depressing. I can't even imagine the pain he felt telling her mom about her death.Poor Inuyasha, he always has problems with feeling inadequate as a protector. I'm glad that at least he will be accepted into the family. Sweet. I still feel like bawling because Kagome is dead *tears* Liked the chappie, I await more!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 00:03 CDT
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Aagh! Heart Wrenching. I'm just as curious as the rest of the group...what's going to happen? Inuyash's reaction was interesting as well so I'll be interested to see what that leads to. Hope you had a great birthday! ;)
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think I will agree with the other reviews and say that that was an intense last chapter. What a cliffie! Eeek. You've gotten me hooked to say the least. Kagome's behavior definitely needs some explaining despite the fact that I feel like she should be like that more considering her normal circumstances. Oh, what could have happened that night? Great writing, I love it. I await your update ;)
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Title: That was intense
Reviewed By: Twinkle On: July 07, 2006 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update! Great chapter - battle scene was both intense & well written. Poor Kagome - She'd better not die! Update soon so I can find out. he he.
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 27, 2006 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! Excellent chapter - Great characterization & dialogue.....Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 25, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far, and sincerely hope that you update soon ~ I desperately need to know why Kagome is so upset. And why the heck is Inuyasha acting so nonchalant about the whole thing? The ass.
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