| "Blizzard" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sieg_15 On: July 06, 2006 12:48 PDT
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YES! Loved the third chapter. Gotta give Keitaro props. Great story once again. It looks like it's gonna evolve to something even better.
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Reviewed By: MitoFreak On: July 06, 2006 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The scene with Motoko and Keitaro was intense. Great story so far, and its the passion in the story that makes it good, the sex scenes are good but they alone don't make a good story. So I'm glad to see you're exploring other facets of their feelings. Is Keitaro going to get counseling?
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read your other fics, but i must say that none surprised me as much as this one. i've never seen a kei/yuki pairing before, and the only other fic i saw yuki in didn't put her in a good light either. so i was surprised when that pairing jumped out at me. but, that's not what shocked me. when i read chapter 3 i was stunned. i'm obviously no stranger to the kei/mot circle, but i have never seen it portrayed in this way. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time thinking someone would stop it, as that almost always happens, but this time no one did. the outcome stunned me, surprised me, and baffled me. i don't think i've ever read something like this before and i must ask if you're a professenial romance writer. because, all jokes aside i think you've got what it takes. i'm definetly looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 09:20 PDT
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wow, didn't see that coming keep it up
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 09:13 PDT
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I think I just fractured my jaw, when it fell on the floor! Holy Shit! I did not anticipate that. And I eagerly await to read what happens next. I'm sure the fallout will be nuclear.
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 22:52 PDT
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Hehehe. I'm sensing a few flames coming your way. ^_^ However, I liked this chapter. It does seem to send this story towards darkness, which, being a fan of darkfics... nothing wrong with that!
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Reviewed By: Judas On: July 05, 2006 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lord! Only if Keitaro would just keep it in his pants he wouldn't lose the will to live afterward. But wow Shinobu's mom, damn didn't see that one coming. lol. Shinobu's mom got it go'in on. Can't wait for more keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Drool On: July 04, 2006 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Marry me... NOW! This is some of the most immersive smut I've ever read. The sprinkling of rough sex definitely adds it's own odd charm. I can only hope you keep writing smut in this fandom.
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:02 PDT
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You continue to entrall me, I found my self wanting to yell at keitaro and tell him to 'fuck her in the ass!' So, good job so far
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Title: maa...
Reviewed By: Kalis-nin On: July 02, 2006 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that you should keep this strickly kei/OC even after the other girls find out I need this to be continued.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 22:25 PDT
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Hmmm... very interesting. Yuki, ice-queen bitch, or so it seems... I wonder what her motivation is, doing all this to Keitaro...
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 18:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
nicely done
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Reviewed By: Noda On: June 27, 2006 10:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Harsh, but not bad. Please continue this.
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Reviewed By: ChickenFoot On: June 27, 2006 01:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Holy Shit! That was hot, I can't really think of anything to say except I hope you have another chapter of this on it's way.
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 22:35 PDT
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Good stuff, thanks for writing.
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