| "Shinobi and Miko: A Collection of One-Shots" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: DemonessOkita28 On: July 21, 2006 10:54 CDT
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That was rather uncalled for the second chapter didnt seem all that great cuz u made Shino-kun into a more reactive guy. That isnt how he is hes usually more stoic and silent but it was still a good chapter and so was the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: Random Reader On: July 20, 2006 21:46 CDT
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Just a little tip. You might want to add more detail to the story instead of just dialogue. Your story is good as it now and a little more detail will make it better. Keep up the good job. ^^ And KirasGirl, it's a bit mean saying that the other author has a problem. The other author was just pointing out that their titles were similar. She did say that she doubted that the titles were copied.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kira'sGirl On: July 15, 2006 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
these were the msot amazing stories i have ever read. don't worry that author with the "same title" as you just has a problem. your fics are so much better than hers. you're the best kagomekabuto please, they would make a really cute couple ciao! -Kira'sGirl
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Title: i luv you fics.
Reviewed By: imyourfan On: July 15, 2006 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have 2 be the best authr i know. plz update soon. plz do a yondaimekagome they both deserve luv
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Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess On: July 14, 2006 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I like your oneshots, but can you PLEAZ do a SasukeKagome oneshot? Pretty pleaz with sugur and gummy worms and strawberries and chocolate sause and skittles and m&ms and smarties and icecream???? PLEAZ??? lol. keep on writing!!! Til you post your next chapter; Youkai Goddess
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:46 CDT
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Awww...That was such a cute chappie!Update with more one shots plz.UPDATE soon!!!
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in) On: July 13, 2006 17:35 CDT
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YAY! Zabuza and Kagome! Thank you! and isn't that other fic like "When a Shinobi Loves a Miko" instead of meets?
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Reviewed By: Lord_Of_Darkness On: July 12, 2006 19:13 CDT
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Please, NarutoxKagome I would be extemly happy.
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Reviewed By: banbansgirl On: July 10, 2006 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that the first Itachi/Kagome i have seen that has them when they'er older! i love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonLord6_6_6 On: July 09, 2006 15:49 CDT
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Could you please make the next one Naruto/Kagome, that would be cool.
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Reviewed By: DemonLord6_6_6 On: July 09, 2006 15:49 CDT
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Could you please make the next one Naruto/Kagome, that would be cool.
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Reviewed By: Kiros_angel (logged out) On: July 06, 2006 20:27 CDT
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Wow! It was amazing! May I request a Naruto/Kagome story? Or perhaps a Kakashi/Kagome story?
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Title: HOW KAWAIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job! these were so cute and i really liked them! are their anymore?
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: I3lue w0lf On: July 04, 2006 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it =D!! I was wonderin', since everyone put in requests too.. If you could make a Kakashi/Kagome fic? or Kabuto/Kagome!! I see a few good Kakashi/Kagomes, but I've never seen her with Kabuto!! But anywho, keep up the good work!! Oooh, and gothic fuzzies, I agree with you on the Zabuza/Kagome, that would be interesting!! =P
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Reviewed By: Lady_Midnight(not logged in) On: July 01, 2006 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell yeah Gaara/Kagome the first I've seen this rocks ^__^ PLzzzz keep the storys coming
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