"A Purity Short: The Fairy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 150 ] |
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Title: Happy and Thankful Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 15:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I haven't been able to review in a long time, but lets hope it works now. I just wanted to say that at first, I was very reluctant to read anything that didn't have Inuyasha and kagome as the main characters. Now that I've actually convinced myself to read one of the Purity continuations that I thought would most interest me, I find that they're actually very good, though I still miss my favorite characters. Now, I've started reading all of the Purity conts (thought not in order) and since I saw that this new one only has 11 reviews, I decided that my review might be more appreciated here than anywhere else. ^-^ I just wanted to say that your works in general are awesome, and the world you've created, with so many real-life characters and situations.. well, a lot of them really hit home. I've found myself wondering about problems, and them coming home to read and BAM theres the solution, or at least the comforting to sooth it. I guess you could say you're changing lives.. Thank you for writing; I can tell you're a wonderful person, and you're helping all of us, dare I say, find ourselves in hectic and painful worlds just like those in your stories, and remembering all of the good thats still here, right under our noses. Thank you! And now, I'll give a real review to make up for that. >> I like this story. ^-^ So far it looks to be short and sweet, but withough skipping any of the details that I love to read to make me feel closer to the main characters' lives. Its so sweet and admirable how Mikio refuses to give up! He doesn't even get down! How does he do it? If you continue to update, I know I'll really enjoy this story. And if its already finished, well, I can't say I'm not disappointed, but I still really enjoyed myself. Thanks again! And from now on (if this review even works) I'll try to review more often! ^-^
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 09:56 CDT Comment/Review: Ilove this story! and all the purity storys. i think morio is so cute! i really hope meara comes to her senses and goes out with him soon. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: itsaKTASTROPHE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 09:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i absolutely LOVE this story.. its way too adorable NOT to read! i absolutely adore Morio!!! gawsshh... it makes me wish i could fall in love with someone like HIM!!! you make such awesome characters and i love em i love em I LOVE EM!!! this was a GREAT chapter.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 05:11 CDT Comment/Review: Morio is sooo cute! ^^ I don't see how Meara can resist him... I can't wait to see how this Purity Short evolves, it looks like it will be an awesome story.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 14:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: just like all of your other storys i love this one to i can berly wate for the next chapter
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Title: inuyashaloverr Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 23:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: itsaKTASTROPHE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 14:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love MORIO!!! lol. I love all of his pick up lines and I love his sense of humor! This story is the definite story of "love at first site"!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 09:32 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wooo. Great story start. I can tell that this is already going to be an awesome one. Btw. Morio... he's Inuyasha's son right? I keep forgetting who's who in the family tree. O.o;;
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Title: Hi Sue Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 00:58 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very nice. I think this will be one of my favorite purity love stories. I assume the this is Ryo's son. What I always thought was such a neat twist in your stories is that it seems that Morio is not as girl crazy as his dad was and Evan as well as Toga's son seem to both love to mess around with many girls (girl crazy). Boy if that isn't poetic justice for all of Toga's taunting of the twin's appetite for women. LOL. Well I like "Fairytale" and it is sooo refreshing in having a delightful love tale. thanks again. J
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 23:42 CDT Comment/Review: that was CUTE! im really wondering what being tone deaf has to do with it .... oh God he's going to sing isn't he *GRINS* THAT WILL BE AWESOME!!! fantastic work, i dont know what i would do without your amazing work to read!
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Title: Heeey Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 16:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwwwww how sweet, morio nd meara "giggle" I like how this is going so far and I hope to see more of it sooon, congratulations for all your work! huggs nd kisses Ginny
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 09:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay, finally Morio's story. I love the beginning. Morio is such a flirt. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 03:04 CDT Comment/Review: wow. it's four in the morning and im the third person to review this *smiles like an idiot* well i can't say i understand why morio being a hanyou is important but i still LOVE this chapter. but i was just wondering...since you already have this chapter up and morio's purity in your head, does that mean that you've already finished the story with gavin and jilian and your just posting it now? just wondering...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 02:53 CDT Comment/Review: Aww, this was such a cute beginning. I feel so bad for Meara on how she said that he's hanyou. I think I understand why though lol.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 02:49 CDT Comment/Review: I DID ENJOY IT! I DID ENJOY IT! I DID ENJOY IT!!!!! i think im in luvvvvv with morio (the one i have pictured in my head, who is currently locked up in a nice friendly cage.. um heh :D ) can't wait for more on this story! excellent writing as always, keep up the fantastic work!!!! POCKY TO YOU!!
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