| "quixotism" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 11:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, I was afraid you were ending it but you didn't (thank god). This is a really good story, with an original element that makes is memorable. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: oh. my. god.
Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the saddest thing ever. please, please tell me that you are bringing him back to life or that he is not dead or something. i NEVER cry over fanfics and i am bawling like a baby. darn you! It was definitly good but PLEASE don't kill Naruto
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No!! You can't kill him! Not now! Good chapter though.
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Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story! i look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story!!! Hope Naruto realises that Sasuke feels more than deep friendship and can consciously return that. Gald his retainers sorted that out. Can't wait for more!!!
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