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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good, can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the record...vulnerability....SUPER SEXY! If I were her I would have molested his soft little ears too, they sound so flippin' irresistable! I loved his feining sleep scene, that little shit, gettting some on the sly. The whole chapter was really sweet and I think they made some major progress in the trust department which is good to see. I must say though, that part of her training must have involved learning the art of self-restraint ;) I'm imagining her practically sitting on him and well, if I were sitting on him, I would guarantee my art of self-restraint would be pretty non-existant, lol, how she doen't kiss him right there I will never know, lol. I also really liked Inuyasha's inner battle between the 'oh damn that fels good' and the 'no one has ever touched me like this' because it really brings another dimension to his personality with learning trust and feeling wanted and desired. Overall, I thought it was a superb chapter. I understand Kagome being weary about revealing her true self, but oh how I want her to come out with it already-this is me in my terrible impatience. Considering the history of mikos that you told about at the beginning I can see how she would be defensive (or even scared)to show her true form. I have a feeling you'll make it worth the wait :) Yap, yap ok it was a fabulous chapter and I can't believe you're writing novels, damn girl. Good luck with that. I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 01:40 CDT
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I knew you liked foamy! ^_^, lol , I'm sure it does love me. Yes you do rock and I still absolutely love your story!! So updating is always good, see ya next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was by far the best chapter yet. It revealed so much about Kagome in such a short sequence, not to mention Inuyasha and his little "my kagome" this and that, cute cute cute! Oooh and it's so delicious that he's vulnerable and exposed to her now with his hanyou self. I can't wait to see her reaction to him. Ah, romance and danger. What would we do without it? ;)
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Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 22:09 CDT
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I hate not being able to get my reviews unless I review myself. *sighs* Oh well, good for me on updating!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can't imagine why there's so few reviews because I really love what you have going here! Everyone works really well together and are all amazingly pretty in character (well, besides Sess, but I'm really enjoying his personality in this). I also love that for once a story has Kagome and Inuyasha thinking they're both not good enough for one another; it's hard when it's only one sided mentality and I think that this is a fantastic addition to the plot. Their horniness for each other is priceless too, I'm not 17 anymore, but let's face it I'm still convinced the radio has conspired against me several times ;) At any rate, your language use (hilarious things like calling her a "harpy") has me cracking up constantly and I'm really enjoying what you've done so far. Good luck with creating the rest as you go. I look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 15:20 CDT
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Have you been watching foamy the squirrel? Cause he talk about bagels and creamy creamy cheesey cheese(ch.6 disclaimer.), if not and you've never heard of foamy the squirrel, just ignore this review.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 15:18 CDT
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YOU ROCK!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 15:17 CDT
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Lolve it!!!! update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 22:38 CDT
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Thanxx 4 the dedication i appreciate it another gr8 chapter by the way!!!
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 21:54 CDT
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Gah! I can't get my reviews again. *sobs* Oh well, I think the story is going great. Yay me!
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Title: Old Poundy to the rescue! >
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Hit 'em again Sango! ^^ sorry got a little caught up in the moment... I want a picture of Johnny Dep! my older sister *evil..* would kill for one, as well as my mother no doubt. We are the clan for loving Johnny Dep. >< i can't wait for the new POTC. he is such a freak in it though. Oh and what in the world is the monkey dance? *swirly eyes* rin doing something called the monkey dance, i have a few ideas and the are very weird... swinging from the celing? i love pop-tarts! i need to steal some from Inu-Baka's stash. he's been hiding them from me lately. hmmm... update and don't worry your story is awesome! Manga Girl ---O.o---
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Title: Hehe
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 15:31 CDT
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I can't ever get my new reviews unless I review myself. Goodness gracious. Well, I enjoy my story at least!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 15:26 CDT
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Kewl so kewl i can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 17:11 CDT
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^^ InuYasha defently lost that fight. No matter what his poor pride says! >< keep updatin! i like this story! is it going to be the traditonal inu/kag sessh/rin mir/san? 'cause while the pairing make sense after everyone does them it gets boring. dunno maybe freshen it up with some hard core drama? ^^ UPDATE!
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