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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: cat demon kagome On: November 28, 2006 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg not tryin to be rude but HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FIC please:) ill love u and love u foreva and eva you are like one of the greatest writters ever i am so gonna keep on readin your fic cas it is long worth waiting for but just dont take for ever or i will die my life is in your hands well in you updates well gotta i jus finished blood and tears today and it was really good i love all your fics i used to like kogua untill i read blood and tears and now i dont but im glad that kagome is finally happy i always thought that rin and fluffy would get together i never really thought she would end up being like a daughter to him well gotta go keep up the good work:)
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Reviewed By: Eowyn Organa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm gonna be a harsh critic on this...I do think it has an interesting concept, but the many sex scenes do take away a lot from the overall story. Yes, I know Kagome and Inuyasha would be all over each other alot, but do you really have to show it so much? It does get boring after a while reading about it. Instead of inserting a sex scene whenever you need to take up some space, I recommend using to develop the plot. Some people see sex as selling, but I think it lowers the quality of the work when instead a beautiful story could be made of it. You have an interesting idea with Naraku and their new powers and all that, but your lemons are ruining the pace, so you might want to fix that if this is to become a better story.
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Title: It's like the Honeymoon they never had...have'nt had...!
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 15:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such passion, such emotion, such talent, such such such....lovely lust scenes worth every lil minute you take to read them...They way Sesshou is caring about Inuyasha, the way Rin is acting so grown up, the way Sango is reling on Miroku for moral support, and the conversations between Sehhou and Lady Kaede..."Does lil fangirl dance, hopping from one foot to another screaming your name, and "I love your mad writting skillz..." Jrm jrm...ok then, As i always say you are a very talented artist, i admire your ideas, your plots and writting skillz...Take care Cathy...love Pinkit-chan.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waterfall tears* so...beautiful...i luv ur stories!! plz continue ^_^
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 23, 2006 21:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet story i love it, update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan offline On: November 23, 2006 08:36 EST
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awe... so sweet. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 23:31 EST
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yay! XD another great chapter! i luv this story! ^^ can't wait to read more! :D
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Title: loving it
Reviewed By: adea neri On: November 22, 2006 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read all of your fanfic anf all of tthem keep me wanting more. you are such a wonder writer. gimmie more.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 08:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I spent all day yesterday and all night reading the 3 "Live and Let Die" stories up to this point. Fantastic! Your attention to detail is great! The explorations of feelings and relationships is top-notch. Terrific plotline. Characters all absolutely believable. I can't wait to see how it all turns out! Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: November 18, 2006 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipee!! Part Five of the review!! Squeals happily!! Chapter 14: Kagome is under the Goshinboku. I think that is one of my favourite places for both Inuyasha and/or Kagome to be. If they had to live in the past I would love to see them live near it or in it's sweeping branches. Sighs all romantically.. Kagome had to admit to herself that she is doing better training wise without Inuyasha around. She is definitely one girl who is completely taken by her beloved. Sighs. Loved the way her thoughts wander off into the gutter thinking. Oh wow!! They can communicate over that much distance!! Awesome!! Another exciting and refreshing detail to this so delicious awesome and exhilarating story that is woven! Oh!! I have just started reading the Mystical Psychic Phone Call!! Yay!! I'm finally there!! Oh I wanted to bang my head.. they were all fluffy bunny-ish with the I Guess bit. I loved the way they are more open when they are speaking in their minds to each other. Loved that she told Inuyasha what she did to Kikyou! I chuckled at that!! Glad Inuyasha is supportive of Kagome here! I wonder if Inuyasha's eyes had flashed red (redder?) at hearing Kikyou tried to attack Kagome. Okay, so Sango whacked Miroku for keeping her away from Kohaku. Good for Miroku that he was able to speak to Sango and explain that Kohaku need time. And then Kagome asking about Inuyasha's welfare during the Full Moon. You keep Inuyasha so wonderfully in character it's amazing! Oh, and will we learn more about the Inu no taisho? Here we go maybe Kagome can assure Inuyasha she really liked it last full moon. On my!! I can't wait to read up the phone sex again!! Squeals!! Good girl - that Kagome making sure the coast is clear before getting Inuyasha to play with her. Is Inuyasha getting turned on by Kagome's dirty sex talk? Will he ask her to do it again with him? Will they use this in their foreplay in the future on occasion? That was just as hot if not more erotic! I am fanning myself! I think I'll need a cold shower after this one! Kagome told Inuyasha it was natural to do this, So sweet and caring of Kagome. Letting him know she did this as well. Shocked! Inuyasha is going to be asked to explain to Souta!!?? He was able to talk to Shippo but to actually Talk about self pleasuring! The poor Hanyou.. I think he would rather get sat instead or groped by Miroku.. Oh dear, even far away, another misunderstanding and not giving Inuyasha time in letting him explain himself. Kagome needs to work on jumping to conclusions. But that is part of her character. She jumped to the thought that Inuyasha thought of Kikyou while doing that. Want to smack her for that. She went and made Inuyasha feel awful. Thankfully they got it cleared up! Myouga and Totousai went to tell Inuyasha about the rings glowing and to their surprise find him glowing as well! I loved that Totousai felt more confident in his task! That was touching! Making his character more enhanced! Kudos!! Whoot!! I didn't really understand the line "For he had noticed what Myouga apparently had not - that they couldn't see InuYasha's hands with good reason." Sorry, I think I missed the info plane on that line. Blushes embarrassedly.. Please keep up the most Amazing, Excellent and Masterful Work!! Totally Rock, You Totally Rock!! Can't wait to review the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: November 18, 2006 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we have Part Four of the review coming up!! Chapter 14: Literary Goddess! I am SOOO loving this story! All the neat twists and turns, the plots that unfolds perfectly timed! The way Inuyasha and the others are slowly growing and maturing with their characters! With how you keep them so true to the way Rumiko created them! Squeals with joy! Inuyasha has a braid of Kagome's hair? How did he get a lock? And how did he manage to keep it hidden from Kagome all this time? The yanking of fangs by that youkai and the tool he uses to do it makes me flinch and cringe as well. So Totosai needed Kagome's hair, blood, Inuyasha's fang and the diamonds from his attack... I wonder what he will surprise them with... I am left still since I got into Inuyasha to figure out how does Myouga speak without a mobile mouth? I am happy that Totousai accepted the request! Myouga is just a little too blood thirsty isn't he? I think that Myouga might have some Tick in him... for the swelling up part. Such a true to character response from Inuyasha when told the time frame. Lol!! And to make Inuyasha be his errand boy while he is there is too funny. Cool!! Kagome felt the bite as well!! That is an awesome and amazing extra touch! I love the connection they have!! Kikyou really lacks in the people skills doesn't she? I knew it Kikyou would want to strike at Kagome... And I can understand Miroku's reluctance in striking Kagome... he would have to face two death givers... in the form of a very ticked off Sango,... and then an irate Hanyou. Good for Kagome!! Hooray!! She blasted Kikyou!! Sent her flying!! Even better Kagome has finally struck Kikyou and made her land ungracefully on her ass!! Hooray!! Glomps Doggieearlover and squeals happily!! Kagome is coming into her own!! Kudos!! Hooray!! Whoot!! Whoot!! She is getting out of that shadow that is Kikyou! Bravo!! Bravo!! She will be able to hold her head high! If she thinks after this that she'll never be as good as Kikyou... she'll need a butt kick herself! Awesome!! Awesome!! Superb!! This was perfect!! And a great way for Kagome to show herself to Kikyou! YES!! Kikyou is left speechless!! Gaping like a fish!! YES!!! Whoot!! I also really enjoyed how Kagome dealt with Miroku as she faced off with Kikyou! I LOVE this story!! Excellent!! Kaede is a great teacher!! She is asking Kagome to describe what she did at each step!! I am so in awe of your talented and so very gifted writing!! LOL!! Kikyou had to slink off and lick her wounded pride!! Again Kikyou has underestimated the power that is in Kagome!! At least Sesshoumaru stayed and accepted the ass dropping he got from Kagome. She must be exhausted from all that miko work she did. And I chuckled at the thought of Kaede spending too much time with Sesshoumaru. Just like Kagome to be honest about why she is improving more. Yep, Miroku does make up LOTS of excuses for his unwanted behaviour. I wonder if he'll ever accept the responsibility for his perverted actions. Probably not. I don't feel it is in his character to do so. Inuyasha really doesn't like staying still does he? Oh Dear the full Moon! What is Inuyasha going to do with himself!? He wants to subdue his youkai self around Kagome under the Full Moon? What is the boy thinking. I could have sworn Kagome rather enjoyed herself that night. I hope she has a good talk with him. Isn't annoying when people do that? Talk as if you aren't there... giggles... Poor Inuyasha, I don't know who is worse... Miroku, Sango and Shippou or Myouga and Totousai... He needs to go off and be by himself this night. So Kikyou still feels Kagome is tainted by being with Inuyasha on some level. Well, she has learned differently hasn't she. I am though slightly puzzled by the way Kikyou felt she was spared. Had she been a demon she would have been purified. Didn't Ursaue say that Kikyou had become a vengeful demoness before she turned into dust? I guess I'm a little confused in my concept of what Kikyou is or became.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: November 18, 2006 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Part three of the reviews!! Yay!! I think I'm on a roll!! We get to meet Sesshoumaru's wife?! Squeals I can't wait! Kagome and Inuyasha know her? And will be shocked to see her after all these years...? I am just eager to find out who she is!! Rin!!??!! Yay!! Runs around squealing!! Rin!! Does some somersaults!! Yay!!!! Whoot!! Bravo!! Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!! Kagome did rewarded her sweet Hanyou for his wonderful gift idea!! I think I rather like reading the Kagome can tire Inuyasha out in their love making! Finally Shippou is not slamming into Kagome! That, I enjoy! I like it that he waits to be gathered up. He is definitely learning his manners! Whoot! I love, just love how you present Kaede's character! Was Miroku trying to pry into Inuyasha's decision or was it concern or just trying to be a darn lecher...? He kissed her cheek in front of the others!! This is awesome, the way you are showing Inuyasha slowly getting comfortable with his affectionate displays in front of the others! Very realistic! Very smoothly written! Oh my Kikyou has shown herself to Inuyasha. I don't think she'll be happy with the results after that betrayal she dealt him. I snorted when Kikyou said she means no harm. And then wanted to smack her up the head when she was going to slander Kagome again. Sighs... I kind of was expecting Inuyasha to do a little more to defend Kagome, but I can understand that he still has the memories to recover from still before he can do that. I enjoyed that Miroku has really Talked with Inuyasha about his relationship with Sango. It shows that Miroku is trying to grow up. Yes!! Miroku has apologized and this was from his heart and soul!! Excellent!! Brilliant!! Another brilliant display of Inuyasha's intelligence and observation! Heh... So I was right Miroku was just being nosy and try to pry into something not his business. I hope someone points out to Miroku that he can't fall back on that line because his problem is that he is very much understood. And now onto chapter 14!! Chapter 14: Inuyasha the poor hanyou... he does have a lot of guilt. I hope he will get more self confidence. He is right, if he was there Kagome would go into protect Inuyasha mode and wipe the floor with Kikyou. True, that Kikyou could help Kagome but would she also try to harm Kagome in the pretence of training Kagome? I love that Inuyasha will allow Kagome to make the decision on her own, that he trusts her that much! Swoons happily!! I also love how Inuyasha is also concerned about Sango's welfare. I loved Kagome's reaction to sensing Kikyou. Her powers flared. I am wondering if Kagome does accept Kikyou's offer if she would be more aggressive towards her... Are we going to see some Kikyou butt kicking from Kagome? Sango just found out that Miroku knew Kikyou was around. He smoothly lied this time I wonder how Sango is going to feel when she finds out he has known all the while when she showed up. I don't think she'll be thrilled to learn that. Very smooth and very open with what Kaede told Kagome but it also kind of hinted at Kagome being a lesser person to decline Kikyou. I'm not too sure how to take that bit. Will think on it. Yay! Time for Rin and Sesshoumaru fluffiness!! Loved the way Rin presented her wishes to Sesshoumaru! She did it with respect and honesty. Kagome has a diary!! Giggles... I can just imagine the very naughty dreams and fantasies she would have secreted away in her diary. I wonder if Inuyasha has ever notice her with a journal... or if he has ever thought about looking at it... Or if he had to keep Miroku away from it... Errr... that is the most foreseeable possibility. True to the character reaction with Totosai! He does hide a lot.. Giggles.. I just a very silly image of Totosai with super Buggy eyes! He certainly is rather blunt about making that statement. Poor Inuyasha. Here we have Myouga!! I wonder why he usually hangs out with Totosai.. Super!! I again loved the way you do not neglect Inuyasha's intelligence!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: November 18, 2006 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we go onto part two of the reviews. I so am loving and thoroughly enjoying this story Literary Goddess!!! Kudos!! Whoot!! Woot!! Bravo! I admit it I cried a little when Jii-chan hugged Inuyasha and said he would be honoured to marry them. I loved the responsibility and maturity that you gave Kagome when she went through the diamonds. Swoons happily! Only taking a few with her until they know more about the Jeweller. Even if Jii-chan had recommended him, with the stories that Jii-chan tells it can be hard to determine truths... (Recalls pickle incident). Oh! A delicious twist they can sense youki coming from the store!! Wonderful!! And when Mama asked about something wrong that was a great cover-up by Kagome! Usually she isn't very good at that!! Familiar youkai? Oohh!! The Buzz and Click? I didn't understand that part... Did they have to ring or did they step on a pressure mat or something similar? Totousai?!!! Oh my!! I wouldn't have guessed him for the futuristic jeweller!! What a delightful and splendid twist!! Yay!! Awesome work!! Okay... slight mystery there! Totousai has a nephew?! Eepp!! There are more of him around! Giggles!! Oh my word!! The description you gave of Totousai's appearance has really floored me!! Him in a three piece suit!! Oh wow!! That is tooo Cool!!!! And he doesn't smell bad anymore?! That is even better... I do have to wonder is he still the coward like Myouga and does he still have his cow/bull/ox steed Momo? Oh my, the last name!! That is funny!! And suits him well! Mahjong! It's one of my favourite games!! Yay!! I love the explanation Totousai gave for being in the Jewellery business!! Very realistic very true... What exquistes twists you have in here!! All so very refreshing to read and see!! Awesome and Masterful work!! I am curious though to know approximately the sizes of the pieces from Inuyasha's attack they had gathered up. I think I'm wrong... I was picturing the spears from his attack but to fit in the pocket they sound smaller. That was soo very cute as well!! Kagome selecting the one diamond that resembles Inuyasha's ear!! Love it!!! I wonder when she gets her ring back if it will still be shaped still like Inuyasha's ear... I like Kagome's choice in the band metal. I have another question... Will Kagome wear the ring in Sengoku Jidai or just in the future? I'm asking because wouldn't a regular engagement ring catch on her clothes and weapons? Oh that was very funny for Totousai to say his mind isn't as sharp as it used to be. Blinks!! Wait!! Did Totousai just carry on a conservation without being a bubble-brain air head? Goes back and re-reads... yep!! He did!! Wow!! I wonder how this will be explained... giggles... Inuyasha's was trying not to laugh and Kagome was trying not to either! Have I told you how much I love and thrill at this story? So very awesome!! I had to laugh when Inuyasha complained that Kagome was making his head hurt with all her questions! Oh my, who Is Totousai speaking to!? Tai Youkai?!! Sesshoumaru!! Oh wow!! COOL!!! Sesshoumaru is collecting the diamonds? I wonder why? Oh the explanations giving them all headaches, chuckles, I would get a headache too. I like these little hints that you give us to tantalize our appetites! And wet our curiosities!! Squeals!! Love it! Oh Inuyasha is being secretive and evasive! How naughty of our favourite Hanyou! I melted into a puddle of warm and fuzzy goo when Inuyasha explained to Kagome his plans!! So sweet of him!! I hope Kagome rewards him for his sweetness! I can't believe SesshouMaru would stealthfully twist the events so that Kagome's jii-chan will win and get to meet Totousai! I loved the history that you provided us with in regards to Kagome's father!! And to how they were helped to move in with jii-chan. I loved the added history of the family troubles that Jii-chan and Kagome's father had fought. I enjoy all these additions that only increase the richness of the story! Making it more realistic.
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Title: great chappie!
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
another great chapter! and yay! Sango and Kohaku will be reunited! i wonder how it will turn out? ^^
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Title: yeah!!
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING YET AGAIN!! *raises hand in triuph* plz continue!! i luv this story!! it brings excitment and wanting 2 my exedingly boring life (thats sad isnt it?) *looks down sadly* oh well!! its worth it..plz update soooon!!!!!!!!!!
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