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| "Apple Of My Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Great characterization and style!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you've kept all the characters like themselves while adding your own unique touch to the story. It gives it the Inuyasha feel and at the same time opens it to yoru own creativity. You did a great job so far! ^^ The cliffhanger was very well done. Your style is excellent too, flowing with very few spelling or grammatical errors, which really does make a story more appealing and enjoyable to read. Please keep up the good work and quality! :) I hope to read more of this story in the future.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent, action-packed chapter. I can't wait to read more!
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