| "Naruto...my friends...soo don't mix!" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:21 CDT
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ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm a hole chapter.thats osem.and it was his pencle not hers but good try.lol i can't stop lafing i love tht joke lol.
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Reviewed By: aduffy666 On: July 14, 2006 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, new chapter. it was good. i'll give a review each chapter, thats wha most people do here and on fanfiction.net.
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Reviewed By: aduffy666 On: July 13, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! you follow the origional storyline of some events in the series and add and edit some. i really like this story, please keep adding chapters to it. All the best, Duff-Duff.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok NO I DID NOT STEAL YOUR IDEA.I had that in my head sents careina toled me that Lins doter can cuntrol fire and ice.
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 19:43 CDT
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onisly i can still pictuer kakshi singing that song.and grate fic but don't start ones then leve then alone.ppl will get mad.
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Title: COOL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: July 08, 2006 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you'r story update soon cuz it's funny!!!! hey is Sasuke gonna be in here? u should have sasuke/OC that would be realy cool yup and make one of the girls tell sasuke off O yeh!!!!!!!!!!!! ok well i'll be waiting!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: spookagirl13 On: July 06, 2006 12:50 CDT
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i love this story. i find it awsome. i hope you update soon.
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