| "Devotion" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Chpt. 13
Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 23:29 CST
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Love it soooo much, but it just can't be over for Kakashi. Please tell me it is not true!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:16 CST
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..so will this turn into a sasu/saku fic? or is kakashi still alive?
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Reviewed By: V-townlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story i would love for you to update soon so please update ASAP
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Title: Hee
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, come one. Whoever DOESN'T like lemons is crazy! Write'um and whoever doesn't like them, doesn't have to read them!! This is REALLY awesome! Most fics that I read get annoying/boring after the fluff. This one didn't. I go to school and all i think about is getting home to read more!! Please.. more lemons?! It's getting VERY interesting!!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 21:30 CDT
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This is really good. You are very talented! Keep up the beautiful work!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 08:40 CDT
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wow. it's really cool and getting more interesting!! XD :3 keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww. there both holding the books to there chest.
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Title: Poor Sasuke...
Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story a ton, but I am feeling really sorry for Sasuke. He seems so... messed up, you know? This is probably a distant dream, but I really wish he could have a happy, non-psycho ending. He really deserves it...kind of. I love Sakura in this too. He character doesnt seem unrealistic, strong even. I know, if I was in her place, I would probably be unable to keep the baby. And then, of course Kakashi, he is...wondreful. I love the pervert too much to have a complaint about him and his cute little hairdo. Hee! Anyways, you have a great writing style, and there seems to be no problem with the technical aspect of it. All I have to say is, I cant wait for more. Thanks! emeraldoni
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Title: Devotion
Reviewed By: crimsonhikaru On: September 10, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your take on Kakashi's and Sakura's relationship. Most fics just have them blindly go for it, but you present the reasoning. The situation is unique as well. KakaSakuSasu triangle is nothing new, but the adding in of a child isn't seen very often, so that's good creativity. Keep going!
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: sasuluvssaku4now [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GaH! i rarely comment fics but I had to make an exception for this one. Wonderfully done and I absolutely AdoRe Kakashi; therefore, LoVe this fic! >.< The lemon was done nicely. This is the first EveR fic where I dont care who the girl chooses because I love Sasuke && Kakashi! Im a big fan of both nins but Id like to see quite some fluff between SasuSaku. hah, when i do comment it turns out a bit long, pardon. ^.-" Im anxious to see what happens next! When you get a chance, please take a peek at my first ever fic! Ive always wanted to write fics and finally began one! Id appreciate it greatly! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo! Furi Kuri!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was a pretty good citrus!! now mine would have been corny that's why i dont write the stories!! still pretty good! XD
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Title: taishorin
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done a great job with this story. The citrus was well done. Perhaps next time Sakura will be more willing to be extra nice to Kakashi, as it was all her experiences that we read about in this citrus. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:00 CDT
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One of the Best I have Read up to now I really Really Hope you Keep up writing this story for the FANS. Can't Wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:12 CDT
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Ohh...wats up your sleeve? lol
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