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Reviewed By: I_kix_rox On: July 05, 2006 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok so your story is off to an awesome start ...but maybe you could make a few adjustments such as kagomes pov...she seems kind of perky in a way and its sort of ruining the excitement of the story...other than that good job and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Koyomi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. I hope you continue with it 'cause many people never continue their vampire Inuyasha fics. Anyway, continue on.
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Reviewed By: love it!!!!!!!! On: July 05, 2006 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so much. update soon plz.
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