| "Between Friends and Enemies" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jackson1591 (not signed in) On: November 22, 2006 01:14 CST
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I really like your story update soon and i though youd like to know that while your using the word koi in the right way it means love not girlfriend
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 23:22 CST
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Helllooooo, Where ya at, give me a holla let me know what's good. Sorry about all the slang, I've been hanging out way too much with my little nephews. Miss ya, write soon.
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Reviewed By: Xx-eww_noo-xX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i luv this story and this chapter is really good i cant wait to find out what inuyasha got planed for kagome ^____^. well please keep up the good work. please update XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HUMMMMM
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 28, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't make us wait to long for what Kikyo has on her mind??? you kinda left it hanging !!!! along with Kikyo and Inuyasha holding each other!!!! OWELL only time and updates will tell the rest of the story..LOL AS ALLWAYS I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS!!!!
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: October 27, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Blah, I feel boring, tired and unenergetic. So I'll just say that this chapter rocked, as usual, and that I'm looking forward to the next. Okay ... g'night
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 19:11 CDT
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go kagome, go kagome, its your birthday, its your birthday! woo whooo! lets hear it for bubble-chan! great job!
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Title: c'mon
Reviewed By: kawaii807t On: October 23, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggggghhhh i bee readin this since yesterday n i need that last chapter 2 come up like .....now 8)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just keeps getting better & better! I love the the way you had InuYasha and Sesshoumaru interact, brothers shouldn't always fight. The story is great and I love it~B reading U!
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Title: Wheels Keep Turning
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 03:09 CDT
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Hmmm, what has that mind of yours cooked up now? Awww,next chap is the last one but I'll know you'll make it real good. Okay, I didn't have to burst into a ball of flame and I'll call it even for all the attention Inu lavished on Kagome. The birthday party was a sweet touch too. Still can't stand Kikyo but if you can get her with Homo...oops(smile)Hojo and away from Inu then all will be right with the world. The chapter was not boring, I consider it the salad before the main course, so no worries. Can't wait for the lemon, see the wheels turning in your head on how you're going to get them in the matress tango( Hehe, I'm so corny sometimes). Sweet about the nomination, sorry about the disqualifying but hey there's always a next time. Smooches, and hurry with my update :)
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 18:55 CDT
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first of all, ur chappie was not mindnumingly boring. i enjoyed it. the way i enjoy all ur chappies. i do have to admit, i'm missing the sango/miroku alone time. i like that u included my fave character and he came to the party. i wish i knew what his gift was, but i know it wasn't relevent to the story. i'm so glad she's finally home. i am curious as to whether u will continue with kikyou's part of the story in ur next segment. after all, she does have a secret that she didn't want to tell. is she preggie? (i'm sorry, that's just something i can't get over). i'm glad that inuyasha visited her. i wonder if after inuyasha and kagome's special day, if maybe a few days after, if they will go to visit kikyou. not that i think it would make a difference to kagome, but who knows. it's all in the author's imagination. and u brought kouga, shippo, and ayume in the chappie. another big plus. well, i hope u get a bunch of reviews, cause u really deserve it. not to mention, that everytime i read one of ur chappies, it makes me wanna work on my own. plus, thanks for the shout-out. anyways, that's enough for now. P.S. at least Kikyou now knows that she's no longer the HBIC (New York's fave word). LOL. TTFN and plenty of ~~~huggles~~~ ^.^
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was not boring it was great. I'm sorry to see it end though. I have so many questions will Inuyasha tell Kagome he went to see Kikyou in the hospital and how is the fool anyways. Her (Kikyou) parents are as worse how can she disgrace the family if she was sick. Is she up to something? Well anyway till next time be safe and happy.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:27 CDT
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great job! as always :)
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Reviewed By: Akasuki Hanayama On: October 02, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seems well enough.... abit pushy on the Japanese though... Very good translations aswell when you did use the words ^^ I give you 100/100 so far on this story~
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Title: YEA UPDATES
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 02, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good to see an update, I know what you mean about life sometimes getting in your way. I was offline for the last 3 weeks ,and I almost released this DEMON HOUNDS upon you!!! I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. they are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a coup;e of hours before coming home!!!! Still liking this story so keep the updates coming and don't end this to quickly it is a very good story line!!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: October 01, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep! I really need to keep up with the updates! Hee hee, once again an awesome chapter. I love the random MirSan moments ... I wish he'd pop the question to her *goes back into Sango/Miroku lala land* Keep going!! ~Kera-chan
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