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Title: c'mon
Reviewed By: kawaii807t On: October 23, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugggggghhhh i bee readin this since yesterday n i need that last chapter 2 come up like .....now 8)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just keeps getting better & better! I love the the way you had InuYasha and Sesshoumaru interact, brothers shouldn't always fight. The story is great and I love it~B reading U!
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Title: Wheels Keep Turning
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, what has that mind of yours cooked up now? Awww,next chap is the last one but I'll know you'll make it real good. Okay, I didn't have to burst into a ball of flame and I'll call it even for all the attention Inu lavished on Kagome. The birthday party was a sweet touch too. Still can't stand Kikyo but if you can get her with Homo...oops(smile)Hojo and away from Inu then all will be right with the world. The chapter was not boring, I consider it the salad before the main course, so no worries. Can't wait for the lemon, see the wheels turning in your head on how you're going to get them in the matress tango( Hehe, I'm so corny sometimes). Sweet about the nomination, sorry about the disqualifying but hey there's always a next time. Smooches, and hurry with my update :)
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 18:55 CDT
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first of all, ur chappie was not mindnumingly boring. i enjoyed it. the way i enjoy all ur chappies. i do have to admit, i'm missing the sango/miroku alone time. i like that u included my fave character and he came to the party. i wish i knew what his gift was, but i know it wasn't relevent to the story. i'm so glad she's finally home. i am curious as to whether u will continue with kikyou's part of the story in ur next segment. after all, she does have a secret that she didn't want to tell. is she preggie? (i'm sorry, that's just something i can't get over). i'm glad that inuyasha visited her. i wonder if after inuyasha and kagome's special day, if maybe a few days after, if they will go to visit kikyou. not that i think it would make a difference to kagome, but who knows. it's all in the author's imagination. and u brought kouga, shippo, and ayume in the chappie. another big plus. well, i hope u get a bunch of reviews, cause u really deserve it. not to mention, that everytime i read one of ur chappies, it makes me wanna work on my own. plus, thanks for the shout-out. anyways, that's enough for now. P.S. at least Kikyou now knows that she's no longer the HBIC (New York's fave word). LOL. TTFN and plenty of ~~~huggles~~~ ^.^
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was not boring it was great. I'm sorry to see it end though. I have so many questions will Inuyasha tell Kagome he went to see Kikyou in the hospital and how is the fool anyways. Her (Kikyou) parents are as worse how can she disgrace the family if she was sick. Is she up to something? Well anyway till next time be safe and happy.
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job! as always :)
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Reviewed By: Akasuki Hanayama On: October 02, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seems well enough.... abit pushy on the Japanese though... Very good translations aswell when you did use the words ^^ I give you 100/100 so far on this story~
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Title: YEA UPDATES
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 02, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good to see an update, I know what you mean about life sometimes getting in your way. I was offline for the last 3 weeks ,and I almost released this DEMON HOUNDS upon you!!! I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. they are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a coup;e of hours before coming home!!!! Still liking this story so keep the updates coming and don't end this to quickly it is a very good story line!!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: October 01, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep! I really need to keep up with the updates! Hee hee, once again an awesome chapter. I love the random MirSan moments ... I wish he'd pop the question to her *goes back into Sango/Miroku lala land* Keep going!! ~Kera-chan
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Title: Nah, Really???
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 02:08 CDT
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No No No you didn't, couldn't let Kikyo just be certifiably nuts without an excuse hmm. Now you got my Inu thinking about that chick and you know what happens when guys think too much, they come to silly conclusions and make dumb decisions. I just hope he doesn't renege on Kagome because then I will just spontaneously combust into an angry ball of flame.(hehehe, picture that) Love Ya, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the chapters, I think this one is the most touching. Good job!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 00:20 CDT
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please ignore the dorky cat face. i did it wrong, and should never venture outside of the smiley face norm. still luved that chappie
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 00:15 CDT
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luved this one again. love how inuyasha and kagome's relationship is developing. i just wonder how inuyasha will take this news w/ kikyou. will he see her at all? i'm looking forward to ur next chappie. and thanx for the shout-out. niters and much, much ~huggles~ and some strawberry pocky! =^~^=
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Reviewed By: SaggiBabii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likie this chapter but I feel sorry for Kinky-ho I mean Kikyo but if u wanna check my story out: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/129908/ http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/129908/
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 19:28 CDT
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I like his chapter. Ok imagin if you will you need a sponge bath and Inuyasha is giving it to you...need I say more.(LOL) Oh man I wanted Kikyou to go to jail. Oh man a tumor, she has a tumor. I can stand Inuyasha a little worried over Kikyou operation and all but his comment at the end scares me,I hope doesn't pull away from Kagome. Till next chapter.
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