| "Between Friends and Enemies" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akasuki Hanayama On: October 02, 2006 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seems well enough.... abit pushy on the Japanese though... Very good translations aswell when you did use the words ^^ I give you 100/100 so far on this story~
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Title: YEA UPDATES
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: October 02, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good to see an update, I know what you mean about life sometimes getting in your way. I was offline for the last 3 weeks ,and I almost released this DEMON HOUNDS upon you!!! I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. they are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a coup;e of hours before coming home!!!! Still liking this story so keep the updates coming and don't end this to quickly it is a very good story line!!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: October 01, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep! I really need to keep up with the updates! Hee hee, once again an awesome chapter. I love the random MirSan moments ... I wish he'd pop the question to her *goes back into Sango/Miroku lala land* Keep going!! ~Kera-chan
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Title: Nah, Really???
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 02:08 CDT
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No No No you didn't, couldn't let Kikyo just be certifiably nuts without an excuse hmm. Now you got my Inu thinking about that chick and you know what happens when guys think too much, they come to silly conclusions and make dumb decisions. I just hope he doesn't renege on Kagome because then I will just spontaneously combust into an angry ball of flame.(hehehe, picture that) Love Ya, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the chapters, I think this one is the most touching. Good job!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 00:20 CDT
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please ignore the dorky cat face. i did it wrong, and should never venture outside of the smiley face norm. still luved that chappie
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 00:15 CDT
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luved this one again. love how inuyasha and kagome's relationship is developing. i just wonder how inuyasha will take this news w/ kikyou. will he see her at all? i'm looking forward to ur next chappie. and thanx for the shout-out. niters and much, much ~huggles~ and some strawberry pocky! =^~^=
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Reviewed By: SaggiBabii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likie this chapter but I feel sorry for Kinky-ho I mean Kikyo but if u wanna check my story out: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/129908/ http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/129908/
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 19:28 CDT
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I like his chapter. Ok imagin if you will you need a sponge bath and Inuyasha is giving it to you...need I say more.(LOL) Oh man I wanted Kikyou to go to jail. Oh man a tumor, she has a tumor. I can stand Inuyasha a little worried over Kikyou operation and all but his comment at the end scares me,I hope doesn't pull away from Kagome. Till next chapter.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story sorry for being so late with this review. You made me cry when Inuyasha cried that was way to sad..but I'm glad Kagome's ok. And I'm glad Sango kicked Kikyou's ass now that what I call priceless. By the way what will happen to the tramp (Kikyou)? I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fgvjgfj On: September 12, 2006 18:48 CDT
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wow your such a great writer and i cant believe the readers only gave you 60 reviews so heres another one. i love your story
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 17:41 CDT
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awwwwww!!!!!!! soooo cuuuttteee!!!!! and YES!! *starts singing in a singsong voice* sango kicked her ass, sango kicked her ass!! yeah! good chapter!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 17:12 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I've been gone on vacation for a month and I have not had any internet access. That's why I haven't been reviewing.This story is great. I didn't think Kikyo was going to be that crazy. Please write a new chapter soon.
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Title: GREAT CHAPTER
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 On: September 03, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creat chapter!!!!! Wow atleast I can breath agian keep it real an keep those up dates coming!!!!! Can hardly wait FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: SangoXMiroku132 On: September 01, 2006 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO SANGO GO! Beat that nasty witch, Kikyo! Oh wait, depressing chapter ... er ... I'm relieved that Kags is alright. Three bullets, ouch! I felt so bad for Mrs. Higurashi, too. I wouldn't want to recieve a call like that. Great chapter, update when ever, 'kay? TTFN! ~Kera-chan
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