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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 30, 2006 12:49 CDT
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oh that fic was great, one of the best ones arround. i really like the polygamy. oh that is goint to be a good surprise for later. by the way for all you people who dont know what that means, poly=many and gamy=women or wives. also the way to pronounce it is with the 'y' making an 'i' sound. ill let you guy figure out the details of whats going to happen when everyone else in the fic finds out that naruto can have more than one wife, heh heh heh. hope you feel enlighten cuz i hate teaching. well my work here is done and once again great fic.
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Title: post script
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 05:24 CDT
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p.s. i also noticed that your 8th chapter seems to end with out naruto showing off, i mean whats up with that. i hope you update soon and like i said before i really like your fic, so write more!!!!!! well its gettin late. more like its really early!!! holy shit?!?!!! i stayed up till 3:30 am!?!?!?!!!!! well i got to go to bed so i can atleast function in the morning cya l8r
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Title: pretty damn good
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 05:18 CDT
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the further i got in the story the more i liked it. at the begining it was kinda iffy, cuz it is kinda hard to believe that all of the clans wanted him but as the story got further on it really filled up nicely. i mean damn who wouldn't like all that also i liked how u compaired his dragon to the others like a doberman to a couple of poodles. i have to admit this fic was, like i said before, pretty damn good. sorry i cant help with grammer cuz like i say to all the people's fics i r&r i wouldnt no a spelling and or grammer mistake even if it came up and bit me in the ass, like a certin dog did to mizuki. anyway i g2g so cya l8r
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Reviewed By: darkprince32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 22:07 CDT
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Very, Very nice please update soon this story is really getting interesting
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Title: Sugoi!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 22:58 CDT
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I must give you a 10,10 rating on EVERYTHING!! *looks up with huge hearts in her eyes* oh...my...freakin...GOD! I love this story!!! Please update soon and dont make ur fans wait, like, 3 months like some authors do, PLEASE!! Ja Ne
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this story and i must say i'm impressed. it's clear you put a lot of thought into it. i think the eight chapter is incomplete though. i hope you update soon.
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