| "Against All Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I really love this story. Please up date as soon as you can. Your writing skills are really good, I don't see that very often. - chibi hikari
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 16:25 CDT
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CURSES!!! A cliffy...*glowers at you* This story was good, I'm usually not fond of the "Kagome being a demon" thing but I like the way you've done it and I'm looking forward to more, especially what she looks like!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tori CHan ^_^ On: July 15, 2006 03:55 CDT
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this i really like. i look forward to another update and also whats up with inu? why is he stalking her? *sigh* aqll my questions will be answered when you update hopefully lol :) good luck with yourt next chapter!!! ^^
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was awesome! I can't wait until the next chapter! ^^ -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix(did not sign in) On: July 14, 2006 20:04 CDT
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hey evil cliffhanger. i want to know what she looks like. i liked this. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 14, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but the ending of ch7 was just cruel and unusual (or usual for writers) punishment! i cant wait for an update, please pwease do it soon!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Title: Darn you!
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Haywire Hakaze and CanineKagome, why did you have to leave it at a cliffhanger! Darn it! lol! Its me, DarkianMoon, except with my different penname on Mediaminer. I like to thank you for emailing me about the other chapter here. Anyway this hasn't nothing to do with the review, so I will get to the point. It has be a joy to read the other chapters, I am mostly looking forward to Kagome's and Yoko-kun's relationship. Kagome being a demon has been done before, but I trust that you with handle it well. Please update soon, and continue doing your good work. Ja! ^_~
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:25 CDT
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*sigh* Honestly, i'm not sure whether i love or loathe this story. Don't get me wrong, you are a fantastic writer. You have excellent word choice and spectacular descriptions. I am a huge fan of the pairing, and your characterization is top-notch. However. I've never been able to take that whole "kagome is really a youkai" plot seriously. It's just...too unfeasible, and it always seemed kind of like she was cheating when she was instantly imbued with huge amounts of power without having to work for it. And doesn't she seem a bit too accepting of the fact that her 'okaa-san' isn't her real mother? That her whole life has been a lie? I don't know. Maybe i'm just being too nit-picky, and should just shut up and enjoy the story. In the end, i guess my main complaint would yield this advice: put yourself in your character's place. How calm would you be to discover that not only is your family not your family, but you aren't even the species you thought you were? Although it may not be readily apparant, i am enjoying this story. I'm excited to see how you decide to handle youko and kag's relationship, and in spite of myself, i found myself yelling at the screen when you ended with that horrible, horrible cliffy. I think you may be one of the very few authors who can write a story with this sort of plot, that i will still be willing to read. I'm going to trust you not to make this suck, but i believe you'll do just fine, if your other stories are anything to go by.
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Reviewed By: ME On: July 14, 2006 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! MUST UPDATE SOON!!!! I'LL DO WHATEVER YOU WANT!!! IF YOU WANT, I'LL...REVIEW FOR EACH CHAPTER YOU'VE WRITTEN SO FAR!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagsinred(not login) On: July 14, 2006 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the sory so far can you please update very soon
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 08:41 CDT
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Your truly evil. How could you upload so many chapters and then still leave us hoping for more. Do you know how long we've waited for this chapter? And then you leave an ending like that? Anyway, UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: CanineKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I love it so far and I love the pairing even move. Ur mean though why upload all them chapter then leave the suspense for what Kagome looks like in her demon form, ur mean I tell u, mean. :(
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Reviewed By: hakutou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:31 CDT
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I like this story!!! well...maybe it's just the fact that I love Kagome being youkai, and paired with Youko. But that was mean!! Having a cliffy and got me wondering what type of kitsune she is. But it's great, and to all Kikyo-haters - Down with the clay-pot bitch!!! (and Inuyasha too since he's such an ass)
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:27 CDT
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Oh, you little tease. How dare you upload so many chapters yet still leave me clinging to the last sentence and begging for more? Damn you. Damn you, I say! XD
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