| "Kibou Hoshi" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tahtorak On: April 11, 2011 19:54 EDT
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Hm...I've never really thought of Destroyer Dom as a genius, just a robot of average intelligence. I will never understand why the show's producers changed him from speaking normally, like in A Princess, A Cake, and the Winged Knight ("Finally a weapon! It's rather primitive, but it'll have to do!"), to a dimwit like in Attack of the Big-Zam ("Me wanna shoot BIG GUN! BOOM!"). Meh, either way, I love him either way, and I like how you're showing Destroyer Dom taking charge! I just have one little suggestion: When Destroyer Dom picks up Zapper Zaku and Grappler Gouf and chases after the Gundam Force on his wheels, you should feature the ride being less comfortable, with Destroyer Dom saying, "Dah, sorry. Me need snow tires!" And What was with all the Ò and Ó's? I had to put the fanfic in a word document and use the Find and Replace function to switch them with "'s because they were so annoying! FYI, you say that people should read TDAT's The Tides of Hopes and Fears before reading this fanfic. She hid them from the public on Mediaminer because she wants to do revisions. |
Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 21:09 EDT
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Hooray!! It's up!! 8D *boogieboogieboogie* It's so nice to see an update! I gotta' say, this chapter came out excellent. It's still building up the major parts and is still all suspenseful and such. Love the new part you added with Bakunetsumaru melting the flames and the Dark Axis trio getting freed. Poor 'mysterious Kendra dude'. Help is on the way! :) Can't wait for the next update!!
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Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 22:46 EDT
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Wow, the trio got frozen in ice.... Never saw that coming! Great chapter, it was cool how you mentioned Kharn and everything. :) Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dr Licorice [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dr. Licorice liked! 8D Please update soon~!
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Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 21:46 EDT
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*pats you on the back* Ah, I know how you feel. I too am a Senior this year, I must say, I'm going through a bit of denial. -.-0 Only seemed like yesterday that I was a wee wittle Freshman. But great chapter, oooo you're leading up to something big, I can feel it. Much kudos. :)
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 19:25 EDT
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Okay, now I'm finding it extremely amusing how we're uploading chapters to our stories at the same time. XDD Yay for simultaneous stuffers!! Anyways, awesome chapter! Poor Zero, keeps getting his memory wiped. XDD Still love the sinking ducks comment from Bakunetsumaru. *pats the samurai on the head* And the plot is starting to come into motion! Hooray! Keep it up Erisu! I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 20:51 EDT
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Holy cow, we've added new chapters to our fanfics on the SAME DAY. 8D That is awesome!! And yes, I'm going to strangle you for the crazy cliffhangers!! *stangle strangle* I kid; I'm famous for them myself. XP Awesome, awesome chapter Erisu! I'm starting to see the plot set more into motion and more pieces of the puzzle added on to it. Loved GunEagle chasing the 'shadow' scene. Aiyeee, this is just getting me all excited! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ Oooo, Kendraaaa. XDDD Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zero 101 On: July 07, 2008 08:05 EDT
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I love this fic, great job and keep up the great work. Many kudos to you! ^3^
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Reviewed By: MsDevin92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 07:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD I just loved the part with the Dark Axis trio! They're so funny, and you write them so well! I can just imagine Dom blasting Zapper like that, and then he and Grappler tackling him *rofl*
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 21:40 EDT
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*says in a big voice* Look to the stars Zero... XP Couldn't resist. Yay!! Chapter 2 is up now!! And I get to see the rest of it!! 8D You did an awesome job re-editting the fight (Seriously though, that was way better than what I wrote. o_o Sorry mine sucked so bad, I had low inspiration too ^^;;;). And it's true, Zero needs to let it all out!! XP (He probably does, just not in public) Loved this chapter Erisu!! I can't wait for the next one!! 8D
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Title: I Have A Feeling... 9_9
Reviewed By: Zero 101 On: July 03, 2007 20:24 EDT
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So you finally updated huh? Glad to see that you're back! Uh oh, this is leading up to something BIG, I can feel it. I also have a feeling that Zero had a crush on Rowan...I think. Oh well, that's what my gut instinct is telling me but it isn't always right! ^_~ Can't wait to see the next chapter! :D
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Title: Uh Oh...
Reviewed By: Zero 101 On: June 16, 2007 16:20 EDT
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Uh oh, what's wrong with the the former D.A. trio? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! It's been editted!! 8D It looks great Erisu! I love how you made the gundams all bewildered and such at the Dark Axis' actions. The chapter's still really good and the new dialogue is great too! Although, there was one line repeated twice somewhere...I think it was before the DA trio were going to blow the place up and Zapper was mockingly saluting Captain. Just thought I'd point that out. ^^; Again, wonderful job! I can't wait for Ch. 2! :D
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Title: I Remember This!
Reviewed By: Zero 101(not logged in) On: November 29, 2006 14:34 EST
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Yeah! I remember this fic! This was the veary first fic that I've ever read, and it's the one that inspired me to start writing fics. You got the personalties of the characters perfectly and it's a very interesting story, very well writen. I came across it on Google one day by accident...whoops. But now I consider it one of my few GOOD accidents! Please don't leave me hangin, continue with the story...please.
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Reviewed By: Talec (too lazy to login) On: July 23, 2006 23:59 EDT
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I like it a lot :o please continue!
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