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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:10 EDT
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Oh, and a little p.s. for dewrose, who reviewed right before me: Interesting thought. I'd love to know what happened to Aislyn, so it'd be interesting if he was, if this was a vehicle to bring the MacDannoughs back in. Jude covington's as much of a bastard as Ian MacDannough.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:07 EDT
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Poor Gavvie! What a bastard Covington is! Seriously, what is his problem with Cain? Anyway, at least we know it is Alastair Gregory, but don't you hate it when you know something and the characters don't? You just want to scream, "No, he did it, don't talk to him, arrest him!AAARGH!" I wanted to do that through SesshoMaru's early interaction with Hisadaicho in Metamorphosis, actually. When will they learn? I'm gonna review every chapter, 'cos I like seeing my username in print. And even tho i don't bother with marking it any more, just know that it's forever 10/10 ^_-!
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Title: adimilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Sue, hope all is well with your family. Good story but I have a question about one of the characters. It's about Alastair Gregory. Is he related in any way to the character Paul Gregory from your "Fairy tale" story about Meara and Morio? Maybe you did touch on this before and I missed it but, I hope you will give me an answer cause I am just curious. That's all. thanks again for a nice mysterious love story. J
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Reviewed By: blue lolipop [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, griffin is soo cute. i want a bear youkai to. only mine will be named Theo. actualy, don't mind me at all, i haven't eaten anything but fundip and mountain dew!!!!!! yah, i will blame the sugar intake... anyway, as always, great chapter!!! i really like seeing cain interact with the other tai-youkai. and cain lighting up that cigarette? kami, he is such a bad ass. lol. keep up the good work. god bless.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I hate the Australian Tai youkai....someone needs to punch him down a couple of pegs!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I felt for a minute there that I was getting a lesson in DNA studies. Awesome job. And I love that that griffin is finally letting his guard down. But I really, really don't like that damn Australian Tai youkai, Cain should've electricuted his ass...lol. Awesome job as always!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 02:58 EDT
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And why does the Aussie Taiyoukai have a biff with Cain? I was under the impression somehow that they were on good terms. Of course, the whole 'let's ship off all of our criminals to a seemingly uninhibited island/continent' would get my knickers in a twist also. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: This is getting intense...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what theme song Gavin's youkai is humming now? LOL! So, looks like the Australian Taiyoukai is kinda...well...a JERK. I hope the two "interrogators" help Gavvie. Cain's gonna be PO, isn't he? And poor Jilli...oh shit...poor IZZY! This is getting so good! An I'm so glad Charlie/Froofie's getting better! YAY! Looks like Griffin's getting more domestic **chortles with glee imagining him in a Winnie the Pooh bathrobe** I LOURVED this chappie, Sue! Keep up the good work! At you're leisure, of course. Your brother's in my thoughts! Glad to hear he's recovering!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:18 EDT
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yay an update! as usual u were great! update soon : )
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:18 EDT
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This, once again, is one of those chapters that I have to reread a few times and stare blankly at for an hour before I can even consider reviewing. All I can say right now, and still make any sense, is...DUDE! And I also feel malitiadixie on your being a great inspiration to write fics. You really do make me feel braver to continue writing my fic (even if I never get another review, I'll still take you advice to heart...and Proforce, too) because I actually read all those Author Notes in your fics and you went through a lot and you're still writing. It must really be your passion. I don't know if I'll ever get that intense in writing stories, but I know what people mean now when they say "I think theis story needs to be written. I'll comment on this chapter in a bit. I'm happy you uploaded so soon, considering the potential stress you may be under. These stories are like treats for me...similar to a chocolate fix to someone on a diet. Oh...so...satisfying. I think it's mostly the humor and character development...then again, gotta love the angst.
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kudos to u!!! u rock my sox sueric! im loving how griffin and cain r talking u noe? and how griffin is finally seeing that he is the only one that can protect isabelle...=) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 19:09 EDT
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Oh my gosh. I love how Griffin called Charlie his dog lol. Hmm...I'd like a few things to say to the Australian tai-youkai as well! I hope I'm right when I sense action coming in the air :D
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 11:46 EDT
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What is Covington's problem? Does he not like Cain or something? Jillian's gonna freak when she finds out her poor Gavvie's been arrestedon suspicion of murdering Dr Avis. Geez. I'm gonna write more often, 'cos I like seeing my name in print ^_^. Keep it up! I found this chapter on the 11th- my birthday. Great bithday present^_-
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gavin in jail? AW I know Cain is going to be pissed.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what will happen now that they are both on leave. They'll be together, and alone a lot more often. Can you hear my perverted, lemon loving wheels turning? He he he...
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