| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, I hope your brother get's better. Family ALWAYS comes first so I totally understand. That was also a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin! What happened to his family was awful!! At least we know his past now!! (LOL) Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^ P.S. I hope your brother gets better soon!! You'll be in my thoughts!!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My most heartfelt prayers to you and your family. I pray he gets better soon
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Reviewed By: Ultra_Violet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope he gets well soon.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 11:35 EDT
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Hi Sue sorry to hear about your brother hope everything will be okay I'll be praying for a speedy recovery. Great chap as always
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears* that was beautiful!.....finally griffin has told his story...and he seems so at peace....im glad isabelle kissed away his reminder of his pain....(his scars)....it was such a beautiful and relaxing moment between to 2....and thats funni....how he got nervous about the children subject....but i agree with isabelle...he'll be a wonderful father....and very protective. lol....keep up the good work, uve got all my support
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took him long enough.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this wa absolutely beautiful and in my opinion Griffin was more than justfied, poor baby. I'm so glad the she's healing him. wonderful chapter and I'll pray for you brother. Take care of your family, I'll be waiting even if it takes months!!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 08:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your brother. I hope he gets well soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 22:42 EDT
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I'm glad that you finally remembered the cat and even put in a little scene about it (speaking of… that cat needs named!). Izzie's getting closer about the 'who' of Griffin and despite how much he rejects the fact that he's her mate, they are becoming more 'mate-like' as the chapters go on. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:05 EDT
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Yay! Another chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Me sho happyyyyy! Kirby Dance! Cha Cha Slide! **walks like an Egyptian** ROFL!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 11:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chappie! Thankies, Sue! I just knew poor Izzy was gonna go all 'Mother Hen' on Froofie...err...Charlie. But, it's to be expected, I guess. I would've been the same way. I'm so glad that Griffin's getting into the flow of sleeping with Izzy and he's melting, slowly, into the 'norm' of being mates--though I believe it's more instinctual and subconscious than anything. His youkai voice never failes to tickle me and I could almost see his eyes roll as he considered Izzy's family...ROFL! I hope they leave Izzy alone...wishful thinking, mostly; especially considering that not ALL of ther translations were broken down, yet. There's more drama ahead, huh, Sue? Can't WAIT! **grabs popcorn and Pepsi and gets comfy** Oh, by the way, I LOURVE your forum! Everyone's so nice and friendly and funny and helpful and your game section keeps me in stitches! I'm glad I joined it! It's really easy to navigate, once you get the gist of it, and you are one of the few forum administrators that I've EVER actually chatted with and got the impression that it was a joy, rather than some necessary interaction. Thanks for all the encouragment and advice you gave me about my story...I changed my mind and I WILL publish it soon ('Butterflies & The Net')--my first chappie is gonna be dedicated to you (cuz I've read all your A/Ns about folks getting to you and you considering giving up--and I could tell they upset you and it looked like they hurt your feelings, sometimes, too--but you never did give up! I'm glad you didn't because the Purity Series is the best on-going storyline I've been into since the Superman Movies! No joke! Can't wait for your next chapter! Lataz!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is wonderful!!! i cant wait to figure out the whole story begind Griffin : ) plz update really really really soon....like tomorrow : ) j/k great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ayame87 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 22:04 EDT
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I had just re-read Purity I and was starting to wonder why Isabelle couldn't talk to Charlie. Amazingly enough you cleared that up in this chapter. But now I have another question. In Purity I, Dammit cam with a name, no one named her. So what is the deal with Charlie/Froofie? Just curious, I love the banter between Isabelle and Griffin on the subject. Anyhow, the chapter was great as always. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 18:25 EDT
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Ahaha, I love Isabelle's final thought! Man, I hope those guys don't hack into that program and find out her password.
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