| "Welcome to the wonderful world of puberty" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: hidoichibiahou2 On: August 21, 2006 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this is purtty.. i love it. your lemons are excellent!!! .. cant see kairi like that though holy crap. it was intersting though. :) keep it goin!
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Reviewed By: hidoichibiahou2 On: August 21, 2006 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this is purtty.. i love it. your lemons are excellent!!! .. cant see kairi like that though holy crap. it was intersting though. :) keep it goin!
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Reviewed By: quatre_x_heero On: August 18, 2006 11:19 CDT
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Oh it was so cute!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 00:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooo, it was gettin so good when u stop on this chap anyways. poor riku...poor sora... well update soon
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job
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Title: wha?
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happend to the reast there used to be more? I like it though
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! WOULD SORA REALLY DO THAT?! SWEET, SORA!?!?!?!? IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT!!!! HA-HA! MORE, DEFINATELY, MORE! KEEP GOING! I AM LOVING IT!
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 00:11 CDT
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this was good. i should read it again. please update soon, iight.
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Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 17:59 CDT
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I think i have read this one before, but it doesn't matter cuz I still like it! Update soon!
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Title: Really good!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just wonderful! The story could benefit from a little more description but I have to say I love how you've set up the relationship with Sora and Rikku. There should be some good stuff comming up next considering they haven't really defined their relationship yet other than in their own minds. ^^ I'm looking forward to the upcomming chapters and keep up the good work! P.S. Your lemons are VERY good. ;)
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 04:01 CDT
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ohh... this is a really awsome story ur writing. Please, please, PLEASE continue. Please? You did a really good job with it, dont dissapoint by not finishing it.
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