| "With the Wind at My Back" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: brie On: December 03, 2002 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! It's well written (except for a few spelling mistakes), and, well, just about everything I look for in a story. Please, PLEASE pst another chapter soon. It all fits toghether with everythingelse... I'm dying to read more! And I definitely like the Yugi/Tea pairing. Thank you x infinity for writing this story. But PLEASE post more soon. I come here every day to check! |
Reviewed By: Kat Lee On: July 22, 2002 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a wide mind of imagination, and I like that in a writer. You have here a great AU fic, so please don't just stop there. Please continue, and hope to see more of this great action/adventure and hopfully some romance. It would be nice if you can e-mail me when you're going to put out the rest of your story. Please e-mail me: sailordeathmoon@msn.com
Keep up the great work and please do go on and continue!
-Kat Lee |
Reviewed By: Azurite [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, an AU YGO fic that doesn't insert Yami Yugi everywhere, or go Yaoi every half-second! *praises Kami-sama* I love the way you've characterized everyone, especially Anzu and Pegasus! Shizuka is a very interesting character too, in her own right! I definitely hope to see more of this (and Yugi/Anzu romance, too!) soon! |
Reviewed By: calrie On: July 11, 2002 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!Please contrinue.I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: July 01, 2002 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's true that the Yami have no bodies of their own, but in the manga they CAN split off from their partners. Whether or not all the writers are aware of this is beyond me, but the ones who started it most definitely are.
As for the fic, it continues to be really interesting and original. I can't wait to see what the magicians' roles turn out to be! |
Reviewed By: Nate Sindel On: June 11, 2002 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics i'v ever read. You've really got the whole medieval thing down pact. I never would have thought to do a fic like this. It's a completely original idea, and you should keep writing. Great great fic. Did i mention it was great. |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaa! When will it be finished!?! I loved it! Yugi getting embarrassed by his grandfather. And I loved how it all fits together. You really made it enjoyable! At first, I avoided it because I thought I wouldn't enjoy it, but I'm glad I read it! Keep it up! Seto Kaiba and Yami Yugi and Yugi rule!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: May 14, 2002 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!! This is the only fanfic that I actually check to see if it's updated. Oh, there are other ones that I'll read as each new chapter is written, but only if I'm talking with the author and s/he mentions that s/he's written more. Anyway, this is a wonderful story. I hope you write more soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Flamegaruru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FG: wow! This is a really interesting ficlet!
Ruki: *raises eyebrow* Ficlet?
FG: *places a hand over Ruki's mouth* Don't mind my muse.
Yami: Where am I? I refuse to be left out!
FG: Yami-sama! ^.^ *glomps on him*
Yami: ERF! @.@'
Ruki: -.-' Rei-san...
FG: Yami's soooooooo cool!
Yami: @_________________________@' Heavy chocolate eating female...
Takato: She's heavy??
Yugi: That is not correct, Yami. She doesn't weigh that much. She's as thin as lovely Anzu! *blush*
Anzu: Lovely??
Yugi: .........
Ruki: Oh my gosh...-_-'
Takato: She's just jealous that they get together sooner than we do.
Yami: Over-enthusiastic Rei-san...
This is a very nice fic! My only thing is: WHERE IS THE REST!!!????
Mail me at Flamegaruru@yahoo.com when you get this finished.
Oy vay, the pic is very beautiful. :)
~Flamegaruru~
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Reviewed By: Time Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Yugioh fic I've found that I haven't been turned off by the first page. Excellent work. I always love a good alternate universe story (particularly one set in medieval times). Keep the good work coming. |
Reviewed By: Maja On: April 27, 2002 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story. Please finish it soon. It's realy good. |
Reviewed By: zoid-dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
very cool. the picture fit exactly with the story. |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon (dgatomon@hotmail.com) On: April 16, 2002 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, good story! I have to admit that when I started it, my hopes weren't very high. Just Anzu in a castle... it got off to a kind of slow start. But I kept reading, and I'm glad I did! Now I'm aching to go and read more of this... but there isn't any. So if you felt like updating this, I'd be happy to read it! You're definitely my kind of writer. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Angel On: April 23, 2002 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it so much it was so cool im just disappointed that it ended.......... i wish it would of kept on and on. when u write somemore for that story pls send it to me or tell me so i will come back. my email is angelsam444414@yahoo.com thxs bye. |
Reviewed By: Sakura22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I love it! Write more soon!! This is really good!! I don't think it's weird that you called the kingdom Duel, it's not as weird as mixing Star Trek with Yu-Gi-Oh...I love it! Write more soon! |
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