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Reviewed By: Shuichi'sgirl On: July 23, 2006 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i. loved. this. not only were the lemons beyond yummy, but it was extremely funny too. i love your sense of humor, and do have it be wufei who's the slut is even better. i wholeheartedly agree with all of your character descriptions. i've always believed that quatre is the most experienced one. yup yup yup!!! so please please PLEASE update again!!!! you have to at least still do a 4x5 lemon. and then maybe some threesomes.....n.n
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: July 21, 2006 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fucking Heelllll, that was hot.*fans self* I wouldn't worry about the OOCness, because without it, this fic wouldn't have turned out as it has. I like how it's turned out. I'm just wondering where the hell feifei comes up with half the shit that comes spewing out of his mouth. Damn. The man Breathes Porno. And inane insanity. But I like it too. So when is it Qaut's turn?
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD! wow. very original. i haven't ever read a fic in 1st person that did the things this one did to me. oh, you are so talented... and hilarious. i love this fic! i hope you have more planned for it. i would hate for it to be finished. and i love the differences in each of the guys. they are all truly unique in their 'gifts'. lucky 'fei!! thank you!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 14:59 EDT
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Absolutely addicting! Some of the hottest sex scenes I've aver read that had me panting right along with them and then of course the angst surrounding Fei's panick attacks simply adds that delicious vein of pain in the pleasure! Your writing itself is beautiful and fits perfectly with the feel of the story and manages to give credability even to the totally out of character Wufei! And I won't even GO into Trowa! Mrow! And Quatre? I think I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight. Heero? I'd create a multiverse black hole if I could simply pull him out of your story and to me! As for Duo...If I was a canine I'd be licking my chops right about the middle of chapter one! Please continue to write 'Breathing Methods' and bring another much needed hit to me and those like me who are totally hooked on it very soon!
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Reviewed By: tenshi_janai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I love you. Seriously, this is the best fic that I've read in a long long time. I hope that the fic's not finished cuz its damn amazing.
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