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Reviewed By: auth_sp On: April 23, 2010 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad that you've updates this story. I have been waiting for this story to be updated for ages. I've really enjooyed reading this story and I look forward to future chapters. ps. Isn't nitroglycerin used for heart medication.
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Reviewed By: Boadicea On: April 22, 2010 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWSER!! Great fun! You MUST KEEP WRITING this story! There will be many virtual beautiful bishonen cabana boys with fru-fru umbrella drinks and foot massages just for you if you keep writing ... :)
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Reviewed By: Erryn Silverblade On: October 18, 2007 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fan-fucking-tastic. The first time I read it I actually fell out of my chair because of how hard I was laughing. I think this is the funniest fic I've read involving Wufie. It does explain why he's always so uptight. If you could write something along those lines for Heero or Trowa I think I would love you forever.
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 02:54 EST
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Damn you need to update! That was smoking!!!! Granted they're all OOC but oh well. More please I beg of you more!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 20:16 EDT
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I love it!! Freakin' Trowa torturing my Wuffy!! Will Quatre get his elevator fantasy?? Please update soon!!! I need more pervy-ness~!
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Reviewed By: R On: October 20, 2006 22:32 EDT
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maybe you should write one chapter with the other four's point of view, or one chapter for each of the other four. i want to know about what they think or feel about wufei and the whole situation.
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Reviewed By: kuroi yoru On: October 04, 2006 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods when are you going to update! I love this fic but I want more chapters so badly! Please with a cherry on top review!?
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Reviewed By: *Isa* On: August 10, 2006 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot damn! i love this fic. i read the first part a fanfiction.net and then I just couldn't stop please please update! I love this story it is hilarious and the sex scences damn girl you know how to write. I can't wait for more. It was really interesting how you portrayed Wufei!
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Reviewed By: MidnyteBatousai -not logged in at da moment On: July 25, 2006 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY DAMN, THAT WUZ OFF DA CHAIN!!!!!!!!>3 update very very soon plz! =3
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Title: Update Soon!!!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! Please update as soon as you can! I am in love with this fic! The lemons are some of the best I have read in quite some time, and I would like to keep on reading them.
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Reviewed By: Shuichi'sgirl On: July 23, 2006 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i. loved. this. not only were the lemons beyond yummy, but it was extremely funny too. i love your sense of humor, and do have it be wufei who's the slut is even better. i wholeheartedly agree with all of your character descriptions. i've always believed that quatre is the most experienced one. yup yup yup!!! so please please PLEASE update again!!!! you have to at least still do a 4x5 lemon. and then maybe some threesomes.....n.n
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: July 21, 2006 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fucking Heelllll, that was hot.*fans self* I wouldn't worry about the OOCness, because without it, this fic wouldn't have turned out as it has. I like how it's turned out. I'm just wondering where the hell feifei comes up with half the shit that comes spewing out of his mouth. Damn. The man Breathes Porno. And inane insanity. But I like it too. So when is it Qaut's turn?
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD! wow. very original. i haven't ever read a fic in 1st person that did the things this one did to me. oh, you are so talented... and hilarious. i love this fic! i hope you have more planned for it. i would hate for it to be finished. and i love the differences in each of the guys. they are all truly unique in their 'gifts'. lucky 'fei!! thank you!
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 14:59 EDT
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Absolutely addicting! Some of the hottest sex scenes I've aver read that had me panting right along with them and then of course the angst surrounding Fei's panick attacks simply adds that delicious vein of pain in the pleasure! Your writing itself is beautiful and fits perfectly with the feel of the story and manages to give credability even to the totally out of character Wufei! And I won't even GO into Trowa! Mrow! And Quatre? I think I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight. Heero? I'd create a multiverse black hole if I could simply pull him out of your story and to me! As for Duo...If I was a canine I'd be licking my chops right about the middle of chapter one! Please continue to write 'Breathing Methods' and bring another much needed hit to me and those like me who are totally hooked on it very soon!
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Reviewed By: tenshi_janai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I love you. Seriously, this is the best fic that I've read in a long long time. I hope that the fic's not finished cuz its damn amazing.
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