| "Departure" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. You can't stop there. I want to know if Mustang will get turned into a chimera. I can just see Edward taking over command of the group, he is the second highest officer after Mustang. A huge calvary charge on Lab 5. Ross, Brosh, Armstrong, Hughes, and the whole gang; or something like that. Either way I can't wait for more!!!!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 11:08 CDT
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Please tell me you have not abandoned this fic! Whether or not the headlines are true I can see Ed storming back and creating a world of hurt. I loved the kitten and I loved the "gay" talk, by the way. Great fic.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:51 CDT
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I am truly enjoying your excellent fic. I like how you blended the story with the anime so well and how in character everyone is. Ed, conflicted and trying to be tough, is perfect. And the hints of evil give me chills. I also appreciate that you avoided the maudlin road and have presented my favorite genre (hurt/comfort) without any distractingly tearful confessions or over the top manhandling. The story moves logically and quickly and I am both anticipating and dreading the end.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are a great author. I would like you to finish your Utena/Sailormoon story titled Being a Princess Doesn't mean You are Helpless. I would like to see it play all out. I love the plot and I am wondering in when usagi and Juri will finally get together. Please finish it for me I am your number 1# fan.
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Title: Sunshine Space Cadet
Reviewed By: Sunshine Space Cadet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only reason you got a 9 on the enjoyment factor is that it is not finished yet. please continue writing
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 04:37 CDT
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Why havent you written? Im sad. How could you just end it like this? Dont you have any feelings! Come on, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 04:59 CDT
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Yaay! I'm your first reviewer! This is a great story! I love it! Please keep writing! Im desperately awaiting your next chapter! I love this story! Please keep writing! Even if only for mwa! Please? With cherry on top.
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