| "Flipped: A Different Inuyasha Story - Part One" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to mention and ask. The subdue thing with the "Stay" word...did you read Ookami-san's fanfic "Turnabout is Fair Play"? (Good fanfic btw!) Cause when I read the "stay" stuff and with her sitting crosslegged it sorta reminded me of that. I'm not saying you stole her idea...maybe sorta borrowed and tweaked. But I doubt you would have if you read it. It's still funny idea for Kagome to be subdued by Inu too.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having the soul of Inuyasha sorta be like a mix of past and present life was a very cool idea. I never saw that done before. Cause really a soul reborn becomes the next person but also sorta retains what was from the past life. At least that's what I believe lol.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started reading this chapter I thought for sure it would be an original character playing the part of Sesshoumaru in the regular series. But then again there was a tickling sensation in my brain that it would be Kikyou. Small ticklish sensation. But it was still good either way!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also like how you changed it to 15 years later instead of 50. That way Rin isn't totally an old lady. I like Kaede but having her young would have been cool.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2 is interesting how you changed a few things but kept them the same. Like Inuyasha with really light blonde hair. The ideas you create out of what is already there is so awesome!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! Finally writing the reviews I told you about. Sorry I took so long! It was crazy with car trouble and stuff bleh. Anyways showing my love for this fanfic writing about each chapter as I label each review for every chapter. So I won't say the update sentence until the end to where you leave me hanging lol. Mostly cause I was trying to read the newest chapter from my phone but dang it all if it isn't having problems loading currently. I must have dropped it too many times v.v Anyways chapter one was what got me going on this fanfic. And that's good cause I remember what my old English teacher from High School used to tell me that the first sentence of every book or story is the most important because if it doesn't grip then people get turned off from the story but yours starts out great.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 22:17 CST
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Wow.It's an awesome story I never thought about Kagome as a half demon.but it's great so keep up the good work.
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Title: inyo
Reviewed By: inyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:40 CST
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its me again in case ur wonderin the read the review was me im glad ya trusted me its is awesome this is a review 4 ch 20
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Reviewed By: read the review On: January 30, 2007 15:33 CST
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dude inyo here i still forgot my password so im gonna get it back and do update soon
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Reviewed By: read the review On: January 26, 2007 18:53 CST
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oo plz update as soon as ya can i will be chekin in daily 4 updates and im really interested in this 1 more than any other fic i read so i bed on my knees that u keep up daiting maybe 4 times a week p.s im actuallly inyo loged out because i forgot my password
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 07:36 CST
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woho, this story is better and better in each chapter, I hope you won't vandalize romantic moments like it was in manga and anime.
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Title: Asking for permission
Reviewed By: silver_Sesshomaru_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have an idea for a story, but it is based sort of off yours. Do I have your permission to use my idea?
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Title: Yay! You Updated!
Reviewed By: TowaNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 12:52 CST
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Love it! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 15:28 CST
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you know what, when I saw that I have a new email from mediaminer I thought, oh another from my favourites. Than I see that its this fanfic, totaly lost my mind, I was jumping all over my room. ps.thanks for updating
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Reviewed By: TowaNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love our story and hpe you put up more soon. you ould be the next Rumiko XD!
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