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| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 › » ] | Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: March 30, 2007 17:27 EDT
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Wow, this chapter was really filled with angst. But I know that you need that in a story in order to come to a great end on the other side. Love ths story as always, great update, girl. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon! ;-)
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 07:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo isn't just a bitch, oh no she is the Queen of bitches. Damn, Inuyasha was just... man, I can't put it in words. Well besides that, this story is the best and how you write it as well. It feels very real, life-like even. Hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
| Reviewed By: Jen (nsi) On: March 30, 2007 06:33 EDT
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Great update! Yet again Inuyasha runs from his feelings and hides in the drugs. See kids, this is why you shouldn't get high- you wind up doing the nasty with a whore like Kikyou. :) Can't wait for the fallout!
| Reviewed By: blue_girl On: March 30, 2007 06:12 EDT
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Chap 23: ewwwwwwwwe!!!! i hope she's not diseased. gonna give it to poor inu. wonderful update! happy writting!
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So intense..I saw that you updated so I stayed up till 2am to read it...thank you so much...makes me want to get up tomorrow just so I can hopefully read the next chapter as soon as possible...hopefully Kikyo will get her ass kicked...and will Inuyasha find out about Kagomes scars??? dun dun DUN...PLEASE UPDATE...Thank you...*bows*
| Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 29, 2007 20:05 EDT
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omgosh I couldnt even wait to sign in (Tarzan14), had to review! what an intense and good chapter. Poor kagome and poor inuyasha. way way glad he realized it was kikyo in the end. it was painful how he couldnt feel with the one he was supposed to feel with. such good chapter! hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: A Concerned Fan On: March 29, 2007 19:35 EDT
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Contrary to popular and rather erroneous belief, and rather insulting to women who do engage in obviously more sex, emphasis on the the sex part, than virigns, the "tightness" of a woman has very little to do with the number of times she has had sex, whore or not. It is, in fact, affected by things like whether it's her time of the month, exercise, pregnancy, etc.., meaning that it varies significantly within a woman herself. I know the whole point of the Kikyou-Inuyasha disastrous sex scene was to reinforce notions that Kikyou is a whore, etc..., Inu's self-destructive behavior is at it's peak, etc..., but as a writer and as a woman, I would think perpetuating false stereotypes about women would be far from the aim and point of your story.
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 29, 2007 19:14 EDT
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I can not wait for Kagome to find out about Kikyo and Inu meeting. Great chapter update soon.
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, am laughing! lol...Inuyasha was really out of it. Her dirty cunt was loose, so that's a no virgin whore there!! So those three words ofcourse was, "I love you" I'm guessing inuyasha loves kagome too, even if it's unconsciously. I'm so glad that sango finally found her brother again. You're story really is awesome. It's well written and everything. And the emotions...it's like i'm the character! Congrats on putting yourself as the character itself. Inuyasha had me laughing alright. I could only imagine how it would of been if it was actually kagome. Speaing of kagome, i feel it for her!! I mean my eyes were glistering with tears! lol XD He said he didnt want her near the band, does that mean she quits or something n for once inu mite go n ask for her to come baq.(Impossible eh?) I thought she was going to get mad with the way he acted, i was actually praying she did get mad, but the saying goes, "You must kill them with kindness" Or something like that. *shrugs* Oh well, this is a long review n be grateful! lol, I really love this fic. Can you feel it through cyber?!?! lol...Thanx for this amazingly written fic and thank you for that lil review you gave me on my fic, it meant alot, n i dont kno if u still like it or meant it when you said "update" But i did update! =) And if you want, you can read it n ....review aswel? *puppy eyes*
| Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 18:59 EDT
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*cracks knuckles* sometimes it takes me a bit, but review i always will (boy, i sounded a bit yoda-ish there) 'cause this story is so very much worth it. god, how much is kaogme going to try and handle on her own. even inuyasha could see it, the point behind her eyes where she wasn't going to be able to hide much more inside, where she was going to have to spill to someone, anyone, what she needed to get out, what she needed to share. i am immensely curious as to what else was on that file Bank dug up, how kohaku ended up at the orphanedge (and will there be trouble with hiten since souten is there, safe, but yahsa didn't take the drugs and meet up as kikyou had hoped?). sango and miroku did a much better job of judging how to nudge inuyasha in to action with the information they were privy to about kagome (way better than kouga's 'let's just make him piss ass jealous' attempt. the next chapter promises to be full of more revalations and discussions, and i can only hope and bit of opening up on inuyasha's part!
| Title: All da wai for this story!
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH My LORD.... Man you're amazing. I just love this story. Hell, I have left my homework undone to read your shit. it's amazing. I failed my two quizzes today cuz all i did was read your story yeaterday. I just started readin a few days ago. But man.. you've got talent. There's vocabulary, sentence structure, explanations, meanigSS to a single word, different prespectives on a same undebatable topic, grammer, originality and hell it's entertaining! It's so effen creative. I love the part where you talk about God and power - a few chapters ago. Hell... it make soo much sense. And i stole a line of yours to put on my MSN NICK>.. GOd is who HE is to you.. so effen true. I hope the two lovers finally meet... which im sure they will. I only have one request for you: Plz keep the story going after they are together. I just the love the crap of these two together. I mean... i know that "... and they live happily live everafter." buh i'd want the story to keep going. Lolz... buh your choice. I can't say much into this... just want and hope. Anyhow... awesome job again... loved it all da wai! PLZZZZZZ repost soon... I'm dying. HEHE... _-Corr-_
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: KagomeAkane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is all I've been doing for 4 days straight and I've got to say you're a meanie!! Poor Yash and Kags they just want eachother but I understand there must be plot and mean things done or this gets thrown together will every other fanfic out there. It's awsome love the story and the characters and I can't wait till you re-post so please hurry I'm dying!!! Lots of Love, KagomeAkane
| Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow you do it again and again everytime you update and light is shinning from the sky. I hope Inu now sees her for what she is and I just have to see how Sango & Inu will take. This story has a deep meaning to me for many reason. One is that Inu reminds me of someone close to me, he's has a power that he just can't see and has saved his friends without knowing yet he thinks Kags is the only one, who seem unreal. Well I'm happy you got some rest and hope you update again soon...
| Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 00:43 EDT
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i started reading this awhile ago and I am unsure why I didn't put it on my favs. but i will now!!! Keep up the good work!!!
| Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 14:53 EDT
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i love this story. I'm so glad that you posted this chapter when you did, i needed a breather. at least inuyasha knows now the pain that kagome has suffered through and he won't rag on her as much. he's gonna be in for a shocker when he sees those scars though...
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