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Title: PLZ WRITE MORE
Reviewed By: la_cuban_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love diz story lolxz its da best nd i feel sangos pain it sad it almost mad me cry nd the endin of diz chap is good I WANNA READ MORE lolxz
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Reviewed By: bluegurl On: December 26, 2006 06:58 EST
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*sighs contently after reading chapter* i can relate. i had a friend similar to kohaku in the emotional aspect. to this day i sometimes wonder what would have happened if i had not been there for her like i was and still am. this chapter is a firm reminder of why the greatest gift in life is showing that you care. I hope other readers of this wonderful story understand this so that there is one less person out there to turn out like kohaku. HAPPY WRITTING!! and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 05:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your work is...well there's no words really. I have known many friends who have been there in some way. I can feel for Kagome in the way she wishs to help everyone. I love this story and it's one that needs to be told.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeepppp...this is so intense...I have so ma ny things I am looking forward to figure out like what is Inuyasha's past, what will he think of Kagomes scars, sango and Kohaku, "killing of an angel" and so much more that I cant hold still...I literally have sat down for two days just to read your story since it was so intense that I couldnt just stop...so please update...I cant wait
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 20:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading Chap 1-17 (practically) non stop. WHOA! You blow me away - the emotions are so on target, and you've matched everyone one's perfectly. So descriptive & raw, yet familiar & easy to get lost in. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 16:01 EST
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Your story has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting continues through January 19th-20th, 2006. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 05:35 EST
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Absolutely beautiful. I understand why it took so long to write; however, it was worth the wait. It was wonderful. The emotions were so raw and real. I think you have captured fully the essence of Sango. I was surprised to see a different side of Inuyasha in this chapter. I wonder how strong the ties are between Naraku and him. I really want to read the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you so much for writing me. It makes my day! Have a wonderful holiday :o)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 03:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I'm glad you updated and I have to say this chapter, this whole story is very well written. And I really felt the pain Sango was going through and I listened to the song that was in this chapter, I like it a lot. Plus I know what Sango or anyone out there must feel, 'cause I've lost two loved ones that I cared for my close uncle and my dog that conforts me when I'm feel alone or sad from school or anything that upsets me, God I miss them so much it just makes me cry everytime I think about them just like right now. But I know there in a good place. Oh and I have a song you can use for another sad chapter if you want its called "Is It Real" by Scott Matthew, or you can hear it on youtube.com. Wellhope you update and keep up the passion in your writing. Peace.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 23, 2006 22:38 EST
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This chapter was the most heart wrenching story I had ever read. To know that there are people who are facing similar problems like Sango and living with the guilt and blame is unimagable. Plaease update this story really soon an you have a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Sango, I think her story is the saddest of them all so far, but I have a feeling that Inuyasha's is going to be 10 times worse. I thought that Kagome was really sweet in this chapter also. I wonder what going to happen between Inuyasha and Kagome now???? Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! Merry Christmas! ^_^
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 19:27 EST
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GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this chapter! You really start to feel what sango went through. Love it!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This was really a deep chapter. We really got an in-depth explanation about Sango's history. I really like the way you write and the depth of emotions you explore. Not much Inu/Kag in this chap but that;s okay. I can't wait for the next chapter. And happy holidays to you too! ;-)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 01:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. Just out of curiousity though...did you change this story from a rated 'X' to 'Y' instead? Or has it always been for yound adults.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're an amazing writer. Especially when you write about Inuyasha and Kagome. Their personalities go so deep. His pain is so heartbreaking and her faith in things is so breathtaking. I love it. I'm waiting for the day Kagome reveals to Inuyasha that she's had her fair share of tough times and the events that created her view on living life; the day she shows she's an angel on Earth that fell hard to get there. I really love when Ayame said that. It's a great line. So please continue this story and update more. I don't want this story to end incomplete and so early. Thanks... :)
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Title: lisam
Reviewed By: lisam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 23:25 EST
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i like the story and went to read more place wright more
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