| "Some Good "Stuff" - Smutletts" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: midnight-vampire66
Reviewed By: midnight-vampire66 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
add another one!! add another one!! i love it
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Reviewed By: h On: September 29, 2006 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your one of my favorite authors, keep up the amazing work yours truly, h P.S. no the h doesnt stand for anything P.P.S. have them get caught but they just keep going at it P.P.P.S. i know. i nkow ive no write to suggest you add something to your already perfect writing style
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the visuals...the beautiful erotic visuals.... lol. :P
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying your little story for awhile. It is so funny and very hot! I liked it very much, and I look forward to your next story.~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 09:02 CDT
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Lol Sreams were cold... loved it. Uodate soon!
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:20 CDT
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Cats an dog....what r the possiblities
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Title: Through the Window
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: September 16, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice intro.. I liked it. It was so very Inuyasha and Kagome. Arguing. I adore it when they argue! Yep! I can see Inuyasha in his impatience giving Kagome a push and knocking her over without meaning to. She ahs knocked him over a few times. So far you have them in character very nicely!! I loved the postion they ended up in!! Very 'Love Hina'-ish!! I was just wondering just howlong was it before Inuyasha and Kagome both realized where his hand was? I laughed at that scene! Very sweetly executed! Sometimes Inuyasha can have a single mindedness moments. lol!! Thank you!! I love it!! I loved Kagome's comment.. 'you can move your hand now'. Loved it!! I have visions of AlterFano's jiggling icon here. Nice touch that Kagome teased Inuyasha!! I love it also when they get playful!! This rocks!! You are definitely building up the tension in a sweet tormenting way!! Really really hot description of the kiss! And I liked how you had Inuyasha start with Kagome's lips and end up under her shirt.. I got an image of him with his head cramped under her sailor top. The truth! I loved it!! Neither of them knew what they were doing!! Yea!! I loved that inexperienced touch you added to them. Very realistic! I laughed at Inuyasha's thoughts about his haori and yukata. That was great!! You have taken this and added all the right touches and seasonings to create a mouth watering feast!! Question why was Inuyasha blushing at himself? no matter it was a cute touch!! I loved Kagome's reaction to seeing Inuyasha.. uninjured or unconscienous! Oh.. my... fans herself vigourously.. is it hot in here? Did someone turn on the heat? Whew!! I am panting!! That was exquiste and delicious that description of what Kagome was doing to Inuyasha and having him at her mercy. The touches of realisim that you spice your stories with are delectable! This is soo hot!! Ah Inuyasha.. you are so very eloquant when it comes to expressing yourself.. I wouldn't have him any other way!! What he said there.. 'I wanna f*** you into next century'... that was all Inuyasha and completely in character. What did Kagome say to him!!?? Wait... good grief.. that was torture for Inuyasha. Oh.. I got it! Cool!! That girl knows her mind and lets Inuyasha know as well!! Kagome is always willing to help or lend a helping hand to Inuyasha. giggles.. joke there.. That was even hotter!! Having Inuyasha and Kagome both pleasuring themselves in fornt of each other!! HAWT!! I loved the description of Inuyasha and Kagome making love for the first time.. It was a little silly the words but very poetic at the same time and All Inuyasha!! Kagome biting Inuyasha!! I really liked that alot and (hope.. will be more in future.) I figured Kagome to be a Wildcat when it came to her being intimate with Inuyasha. They just bring out the untameable wildness in each other!! switches her fans on.. I will need an ice cold bath after this!! I love the smutletts!! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talents with us and providing us with much needed joy!! Thank you so much Literary God!! Can't wait to read more!! .. hums.. a-hunting we will go, a-hunting we will go.. hi-ho-diddly-do.. a-hunting we will go!!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:41 CDT
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Wonderful and so sexy. Aren't dogs very into licking? I would love to see Inuyasha utilizing this doggy trait on Kagome.
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Title: Some Good...
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: September 09, 2006 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!! I love your writing!! Such wonderful and delicious talent!! Whoot!! I am guessing that they live in a single room flat with no or hardly any walls... cause hey, that sounds sexy! I had to laugh about Inuyasha's complaints about the doe eyed and exaggerated breasted version of Kagome and his waif/straving version of himself in the Doujinshis. And how he felt that the artists all made it look like he was killing Kagome while having all good parts covered or blotted out. I would rather annoyed also if I couldn't find any good Duojinshi's of myself if I was a international beyond famous Manga/Anime star! heh. At least Inuyasha didn't see the ones where he looks like a Q-Tip model. Big puffy head/hair and a stick body. (Those ones don't even bother making the scenes that would mean the boxes/bars). Poor Inuyasha. And I think you captured his mind perfectly! Kudos!! He would be ticked off!! Very nice with the details!! Very nice indeed!! I really love it when just the perfect touch is added with descriptions to bring the scene to life!! Thank you!! It pulls the reader into the story and lets them become a part of it!! I liked how you started with Inuyasha's fantasy of the Doujinshi! So touching and sweet! and very Inuyasha - that smirk he has!! Actually you have described a Doujinshi alot better then what I have come across!! Thank you!! Loved the bit about palming Kagome's butt under her skirt.. such a Miroku moment and Inuyasha silently thanking that monk! lol!! Good One!! Ever since I read this comment: "And she'd have a fucking happy look on her face!" I have made it one of my goals to make Kagome look happy and Inuyasha (when I do a sketch of his face.. look hungry/ happy). I really do enjoy all those little touches you added! So very talented and, giggles, so good with your hands.. lol!! and the 'drool' comment I agree with you.. Makes it seem like they put emphasis upon Inuyasha's 'dog' traits alittle too much. I liked how you had Inuyasha feel he'd make himself a little bigger.. shows that Hanyou has alot of pride in his form and pyshique. Woot!!! Whoot!! I also love the bits of humour you added into the story!! They too help create the perfect mood and feel to the story!! Inuyasha is certainly getting caught up in his fantasy and I like it!! Getting soooo darn hot!! It is sooo pleasing and refreshing to have a male point of view of love making and one who isn't shy or pansy-assed (Hojo-like)about describing it yet leaving it so very wild and untamed without being too much or gross!! Thank you again! Yes! Yes! Yes! Loved how you had the table looking back and seemingly to Invite Inuyasha. Awesome!! Kudos!! Geting Hotter! Darn it!! I love your writing!! I think I'll need a Very cold, Ice Cold shower after this!! perfectly timed at having Kagome wake up to help Inuyasha out!! I wonder was she watching him for a moment or so before she called out to him? Cute, loved the little tease Kagome gave a very excited Inuyasha! That is one Heck of a Hot/HAWT Love scene! It rocks!! It is soo good!! Perfectly done and executed!! I also loved the tenderness Kagome and Inuyasha showed each other after such an intense session! I laughed when Kagome made the comment about their neighbours. And what a great ending to the One shot!! Loved it all!! Thank you for sharing this with us. Literary God, please keep up the most excellent and very fulfilling works!! Love to read more and expericence more as you take us to greater and greater heights! You Totally Rock!!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hehehe and yet again this is a great pwp. keep up the good *cough* work.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: September 09, 2006 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one! XD you're writing is getting better! keep up the great work =)
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 00:34 CDT
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Hehehe puppy. Kitten. Nice, very nice. Love it!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 01:20 CDT
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I hope you find more situations to put Inuyasha and Kagome in, because I really like the others you made.Update soon.
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Title: The Shrine Steps
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh. Good one. I like that he kept an eye open for perverts while he's screwing in public on the shrine stairs. Trying to find an audience maybe? Nice!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yea...public AND with an audience to boot, lol....yup, Ima hentai aight :D Hmmm...maybe I can make something alittle public to go with...hmmm...:D Thanks Butter-Bunnzz, that was great...:P
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