| "Dreaming (girl's pov)" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
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WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohooo you updated. xD that is AWESOME!!! But there is one thing that i wasnt happy about. Your grammar; some of the grammar is so bad that I cant tell what you are saying sometimes. usualyl microsoft word is able to pick up the small and easy mistakes that people make. you shoudl follow those rules and then your story will be flawless. WRITE MORE FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN PLEASE =D
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Reviewed By: t recorder On: August 15, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update you shood have bakura "save" her and she falls for two people and she has to chose between a theif and a pharaoh t recorder
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 16:02 CDT
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luv the newest chapters please continue on!!
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