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Title: a reply to " inuyashas honey"
Reviewed By: sadeness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 09:40 CST
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Hi and TKS! Hi inuyashas honey, I am writing you to thank you for reading my story. I am also asking you to please, forgive me about my lack of knowledge in grammar. I am working on this with my beta, so please be patient with me. I have only sent without a beta review chap one and two, all the others were posted just after my beta have checked on them. Since I am not a Native English speaker, writer or reader; I do believe it is correct when my MS-Word grammar and spell check is not red and after my beta send it back to me. Once more, please forgive to not make my story as good as you wanted and THANK you for reading it and reviewing it anyway and First Of All to be Honest and point out my mistakes. Thank you very much. Sade Ness.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really enjoy your story. It's really dark and sexy. My only beef is with your grammer. It is horrible. Please proof read your work before posting it. There are so many grammatical errors, that it makes it hard to enjoy the story. I would be more than happy to help you if you need it.
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: October 26, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. You're wonderful, I feel like I've been waiting forever and foever's finally come. Awe, little Inuyasha... It's those hungry, raping bastards Hiten and Manten isn't it? It's gotta be....right? Thanks, be waitin'.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Easily the hottest thing I've read in a long time! Great job! Truly AWESOME!!!!!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh update soon ..
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: October 22, 2006 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this at first. I hate seeing Inuyasha become all girly, but Sesshomaru isn't such a prick in this either, so it's nice to see them get along (sort of).
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!!
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: October 15, 2006 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that's what I call a good follow up, and way interesting, mostly because it isn't what I was expecting. No, it's even better. Thanks
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow geting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! It is so hot in a bittersweet sort of way! Poor InuYasha. I hope Sesshomaru is good to him!
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Title: a reply to "tinkrbell3"
Reviewed By: sadeness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for reading my story. Bold I am really happy that you enjoy it. Font Color Just to let you know. I am writing chap 9 and my Beloved Beta is working/suffering on chap 8. There is another wonderful Beta Lady working on the previous chapters and soon I hope to update the previous ones and also add the chap 8. Font Color This story is completely in a dark environment. So do not wait too long happy moments, maybe, I can change it, I do not know, now... Writing is amazing, the chapter by chapter feedback of the readers is really fantastic and interesting. Font Color I love it. Font Color Well Thank you again "tinkrbell3", I hope you and the others continue reading, enjoying, reviewing and commenting it. Je ne. Sade Ness.
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Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: September 23, 2006 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwe. Your story is really amazing.( Sorry that's the best word I can come up with at 4:10 in the morning; although, just so you know, there's a better word for it and it's on the tip of my tongue. Gomen I just can't think of it/ get it out correctly,right now)Yeah, but it's freakin' good. It's kinda sad though (if I remembered how to cry or show sadness I would) but not in a bad way though, y'know. It's like a novel or something or a biography. Yeah that's it, a fanfiction biography, it comes with the ups and downs. Awwwe poor, friggin' Inu-Yasha. The darn hanyou just can't catch a long break huh? Well, I guess that was your point,huh? Y'know not to make it into a Geisha/Cinderella story, right? Am I right? But it's really good, otherwise I wouldn't be up at 4 in the morning trying to finish all the chapters. Or maybe I would, I'm not that stable, I think. Ahhhhhhh, gomen, gomen, gomen. I didn't mean to write a critics newspaper section. Gomen, again, looking forward to another amazing chapter. You're doing a freaking really coolsupersweet job. ( I added all those together to make up for the praising word that won't jump out of me and on to this review)
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome you have some spelling mistakes but thats it. loved it. plz update
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Reviewed By: hopelesslyinlove On: August 08, 2006 18:38 CDT
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your story is awesome. minor problems, but if you didn't have them then you wouldn't be human,right. plz. update soon. love all that pain...poor inuyasha*o*
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