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| "Harry Potter and the Beast Within" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Mister Nice Kai is now (No More) Mister Nice Kai!
Reviewed By: (No More) Mister Nice Kai On: August 13, 2024 21:33 PDT
Comment/Review:
So, a funny story. I started writing this in middle school, began
posting it in college, gave up trying to finish the story, and lost
access to my connected email. The really funny part? It was
reviewed! Needless to say, looking back now, this...sucks.
Seriously sucks. I was way too young to be writing it, but it
helped me improve enough to write less-sucky stories. (Nope, I'm
not sharing my current nom-de-plume. I do have some dignity,
after all.) I can't respond to the reviews on this original story,
but I posted the remaining chapters - incomplete and largely
unedited - along with what I planned for the story and a few random
little scenes. You can read Harry Potter and (the Rest of) The
Beast Within here:
https://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/174352/ If and when
you do read the rest, I hope you can smile, laugh, say, "wow,
that's awful," and appreciate how much you've grown as a reader
and/or writer. If nothing else...well...enjoy cringing away your
body heat. It's a good thing I developed a healthy sense of humor
when I grew up and became an old fart. Have a wonderful life, be
kind to yourselves and your past selves, and save your old
fanfictions; they're proof you've grown as a writer, and they can
be hella motivating when you're banging your head against the
keyboard. To everybody who reviewed, from the bottom of my
(formerly) angsty weird-girl heart, thank you. Thank you so much
for your kind words, for sharing my little story with me, and for
not pelting me with internet tomatoes; at the time, I was fragile
and I would absolutely have cried my eyes out. And now, to vanish
into the ether like a horrible cautionary tale about what can
happen when hormonal, angsty, socially awkward middle school
children have unmonitored computer time. This is (No More) Mister
Nice Kai, exiting stage left!
| Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 11:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE ur story please continue to updat its very exciting
| Reviewed By: devo193 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 22:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A decent fic. I think Harry and co. accepted the fact she was an alien and understood everything a bit too easily. A very enjoyable fic otherwise.
| Reviewed By: Raknes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon
| Reviewed By: Princess Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this story and cannot wait until you write more so i can read it!!!! please post more soon. sorry this wasn't more constructive.
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