| "The Trinket" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Mic123 On: October 06, 2017 05:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic here. Loved it so far, wish there where more of this.
Mabey have the sisters get pregnant with ketaro kids and see how
that changes things lol.
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Title: a sequel?
Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! you know, i quite enjoyed this and, could you write a sequel to this one? do your best! Zero Asakura - Forever Love and Fun, until the Morning Sun
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Reviewed By: Spartan429 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the BEST fics I have ever read, and I'm not just saying that because of the sexual content. You should seriously consider writing a sequel of sorts.
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Reviewed By: Zero Asakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good and "nice" to read oh, by the way was wondering if you could make a sequel to this fic... sort of where Tsuruko got pregnant from what happened here... well... good luck to ya!
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Title: Can't Believe I haven't reviewed this
Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the first Love Hina lemon I ever read and still probably the best one that i've come across. I truly enjoyed it and appreciate the work you put into it.
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Reviewed By: Gadoury On: September 05, 2006 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Ive read all of them. Still waiting for updates but man that was an awsome story. You should consider a continuation.
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Reviewed By: DB Waffles On: August 30, 2006 08:52 PDT
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Good short fic, very well written, i can really find anything wrong with it. Also thank god you didn't put motoko's mother in it, that would be freaky.
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Title: Third time's the charm?
Reviewed By: Fatuous One On: August 25, 2006 02:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you may be missing a few reviews, since this is the third time I've posted a review for this story. ^^;; I can't remember what I said the last two times I reviewed, so I'll just so what comes to mind. Good interaction, for a supposed PWP, this actually had a fairly good excuse for some nice steamy action. The only thing I might question is Tsuruko being so open to the idea of another night of training, as she IS married (although she failed at convincing herself the first time so... ^_^). Anyway, very nice lemon, and of a quality I'm not used to seeing so often.
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Title: Very good fanfic... nicely written.
Reviewed By: Taro MD On: August 10, 2006 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading it thanks.
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Title: Welcome Back...
Reviewed By: Harvey Bautista On: August 09, 2006 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pas mal, mon ami. And your writing has continued to evolve, though, looking back from several years ago, I never thought you'd go into a lemon spree, ah well, those were the days. Close to coming back stateside now, and I apologize for not keeping touch with you for the past few months; work in the 'box' kinda keeps one occupied. Drop me a line man, and BTW, good job on a fic that conveniently tied up loose ends and closed a plot, though continuations to this would be far from unwelcome. -Harvey
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Reviewed By: AGX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh... interesting to see that both the Aoyoma's were brought into the moment... it was interesting all together... adios for now...
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 20:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow an amazing story with great chemistry and I think the mother would have been to much. I look forward to your next story, have you ever thought about a Keitaro/Kitsune fic although your Keitaro/Aoyamas are my favorites(either sister).
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Reviewed By: Anonymousies On: August 08, 2006 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent piece of work here. A shame it's a one-shot though. There's so much chemisty now left to be explored between the three. Ah well. I look forward to whatever you write next. :)
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Title: N ice!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 15:46 PDT
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Double the pleasure with Aoyama sisters?! Excellent! :) I don't necessarily agree with the stated remark of Rx7 about the mother, though. ;)
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 15:06 PDT
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Quality stuff.
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