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Title: Response to Sum190
Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 02:42 CDT
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Normally I like to directly respond to the reviewer, but here it goes. I agree, Sasuke would never become affectionate for anybody. If he remained the way he was in the cannon. It may be hard to believe, but spending so long a time in the realm of the dead outside Orochimaru's cursed seal (as I explained his lack of emotion from the series) would have given him time to change. Plus that was Shinigami's test for him. Same with Hinata. Both have had almost a year to change and I can assure you that close relationships can happen in that time. I would assume under life and death situations even more so and especially if Mikomi was looking for something to cling onto as fragile as she was psychologically on coming to Konoha. As for the Sharingan being useless to Orochimaru...that is what he has been coveting the entire freaking series. Useless or not, his entire goal was to take over Sasuke's body for the bloodline. However, if the time frame everything occurred within was as short as you feel it was, then I would completely agree with your assessment of my fic. It wouldn't make sense how people had been acting. Then again, the time frame is longer than you seem to think it is. Besides, I changed my major characters a lot over time. After all, things have progressed for Sasuke and Hinata since chapter 11. Of course, my slow updating might have made it easy to forget things like that. Scratch that, it had made it easier to forget things like the time line and such if you haven't been immersed in it like I have been. Well, hop you enjoy the fic anyway.
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Reviewed By: Sum190 On: March 26, 2008 22:10 CDT
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I really wish i wasnt saying this, but here goes. I HIGHLY doubt Sasu-gay would EVER care for anyone. Hinata?Screaming?for someone she just met not to long ago? Im sorry, but it takes more than a few weeks or a month to forge a friendship that deep. And to put it simply, the bloodline is borderline useless to a guy like Orochimaru. Sorry to leave a negative review in a sea of positive ones l8r
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Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPD ATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!! i cant get enough of this story!! plz, plz ,plz UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: June 14, 2007 17:50 CDT
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How did Mikomi's dad get so twisted and evil like that?
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 17:56 CDT
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AWESOME!!!! Finally, father and daughter meet, and recognize one another!!! Pretty sweet, to see that again, in this awesome story. Anyway, beyond that insanity, I think this chapter rocks. Please update again soon (or whenever, you do hav ea life outside of writing). So, later
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: May 15, 2007 20:17 CDT
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THANK U!!! Although, Kankuro cutting his own arm off is kinda gross.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: March 30, 2007 18:39 CDT
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C'mon, it' been two months since you last updated! I gotta know what happens next! T_T
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: March 06, 2007 13:35 CST
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For the love of all that is good, UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: February 27, 2007 17:59 CST
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Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: February 21, 2007 17:34 CST
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UPDATE!!!!! I know Naruto Shippuuden Chronicles out, but that doesn't mean you can get lazy! School work, on the other hand is a different matter. If you have tons of school work, we all understand. I have three projects due next week!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: February 13, 2007 17:04 CST
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Will Sasuke be alive again? Stupid question to ask. Okay, what about this: How many months does he have to stay with Shinigami? That guy is creepy!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: February 07, 2007 20:12 CST
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Update please!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Update
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I can't wait for more!! This is really good and the story line's unquice. You think naruto woulsd really react that violently?
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: January 28, 2007 19:32 CST
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When are you going to update? I hate cliffies!
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