| "Closer than before I met you" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 22:52 CDT
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hey , listen this is pretty cool so I hope you'll update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 21:50 CDT
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oooohhh thats good . and inuyasha cleaning thats something to watch. lol . plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: September 08, 2006 23:02 CDT
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: ) A smile. From me. Yay! Yes, I'm a bit pychotic right now. I don't look it though. Nope, not at all. By the way, you can totally tell by these reviews that we know each other personally. Yep. GOod stuff your story!
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: September 08, 2006 23:00 CDT
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Fleabags! Hahaha... I hate it......................................................................... ........................................................................... .............. JK!!! (just kidding! OMG U RCK! I hate it when people do that, yet here I am. Doing it. That WASN'T dirty Ces. In case you didn't get it, read it over. Then you will. : ) HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! There. I chilled out. Happy? :)
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: September 08, 2006 22:43 CDT
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Nice. Your editor has a number of small problems, but other than that... excellent! My favorite word is Psyche. :)
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: September 08, 2006 22:40 CDT
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You have a Beat! Lovely! It is my hope that Star 555...... will be a wonderful editor and help you improve. I do think you told me you had a beat, or were going to get one. However, I do not think you told me you had a new story!!! I resent that... YOu are of course, wuite welcome to send them to me too... *hint* No doubt I would mutilate it beyond belief, but I would make it better. That I would. After all Ces, you can trust me. ;)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh goodi can't wait to read more . really iinteresting to say the least i really want to finish this story if u don't mind plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: homicide On: August 14, 2006 04:19 CDT
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hmm never seen this angle before miroku and kagome related might be weird but hey nice story anyway
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 16:46 CDT
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ieeeee please no randomness. i have enough problems with my own randomeness. i love this story i hope you update soon.
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Title: Too cool
Reviewed By: Ookami K On: August 10, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say hummm.... I love it, though I'm not sure on the pairing but I'll live with it anyways you have a good plot and the storyline seems cool so all I can say is UPDATE SOON...
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Reviewed By: Jezi futhark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 03:18 CDT
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hmm why is inuyasha going by yasha?
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 10, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon
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Reviewed By: YAY! On: August 09, 2006 17:08 CDT
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This is a very good fan fic! Keep going please!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 13:04 CDT
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good story hope u up date soon.
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Reviewed By: sakurabloom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your first chapter. I wonder what Kagome will think when she realizes she is working for Inuyasha. Anyways, I think your story has potential! I can't wait to read more!
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