"Enemies & Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 15:11 EDT Comment/Review: Wow! You're really leaving us hanging here. Can't wait to see the next part! |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2002 16:13 EDT Comment/Review: Getting even more in depth! This is a great story, I really can't wait to find out what happens to them! |
Reviewed By: Asuka Kureru On: May 25, 2002 20:35 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You DARE to stop there?! ;__; I want the rest of it, preferably now (but i'll settle for very very soon ^__^) (err, just a question, is everyone bi in the yuy and maxwell families? ;p not that it bothers me... hehehe)
The ratings are what they are because, ( IMHO No one deserves a 10 I think, not even professional writers... or only the best ^^) you haven't got a bad style of writing, tho I've seen better I've also seen far worse (and more often, too -__- ). You don't make grammar and/or spelling mistakes often, or not that I can see, apart from the occasional typo. The overall originality, well... I would have put a five (meaning not good nor bad) or something because after all this kind of romeo and juliet plot is used so often it's gotten slightly clich�, but as it has been rather well developped and the world it takes place in has creativity, it would have deserved an eight. As for the enjoyment factor, I read it all in one sitting and my eyes hurt now, so I guess it can answer to the question ^___^ All in one, it's a quite good fanfic and I hope to read more of it soon... especially since the confrontation between the parents is approaching... mwehehehehe (insert diabolical laughter here) |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2002 00:59 EDT Comment/Review: Great story! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 08:33 EDT Comment/Review: hurry up hurry up hurry up! i need to read more! mwa ha ha ha |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 14:54 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this fic! it's great!!!!! writemore writemore writemore |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 16:11 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wot do you think u r doing?!?! im sittin here waitin 4 u to subit another chapter and...nothing. im going to review every chapter so the process will be sped up!!! DAMMIT!!! ^_^* |
Reviewed By: Shinigami2 On: May 05, 2002 05:13 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!-
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!.
Awwwww!- I wish you didn't end it there- it was REALLY! good!,
Plzplzplzplz- I LOVE Heero/Duo fics!,
MORE!
IT WAS FANTASTIC! |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2002 14:46 EDT Comment/Review: nicely done!! hehe IM BACK!!! must...have more |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 11:25 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Stares at screen in awe* 0...0...o...o WOW!!! i'm a grat lover of heero/duo fics, this is great! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz writ more or i'll come during the night and kill u... *thunder rumbles in the backround*....i'm your wordt nightmare!!!! ^_^ k? |
Reviewed By: Virago [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 14:02 EDT Comment/Review: Must....have...more.... |
Reviewed By: Daz On: April 22, 2002 03:12 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chapter! I'm so glad Trowa and Wufei were introduced. Hope a new chapter comes out soon *hint hint* |
Reviewed By: Za Devil On: April 18, 2002 17:40 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Though I've seen this kinda fic once or twice, this is probably the best I've read so far. I just can't wait for tehm 2 meet (laughs mischeviously) does somebody know how 2 write that word?...
N-E-How, keep up the good work and I'll b checking on u shortly! Veee~eeery Shortly! And b veee~eeery careful, I've got a mad Hee-chan in my closet just wanting for a new 'killing' mission!
Well... thank u! |
Reviewed By: Stephanie Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 16:20 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i really like the plot to this. I've read other fics similar to this but this fic is much more detailed, witht he adding of humor that makes it totally different from the others.
so please don't let this one fall into the abyss of unfinished fics. It's to good not to be finished and definately too good to take forever on each part, unless of course stuff at home doesn't allow the time to pop out chapters like crazy. ::big puppy eyes:: please write more soon |
Reviewed By: Daz On: April 15, 2002 06:48 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is good stuff. I can't wait for the Heero/Duo interaction. |
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