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| "Set in Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix (Not logged in) On: November 12, 2006 12:18 CST
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SEE?! I knew it would be pointless to get all upset that "OMG Ed's dead" and stuffs. But I was rather mad that you made it all a dream. >_> Which I wasn't expecting. Remotely. At ALL. It's like, SOAP OPERA out of the blue. xDD But still good. And what do you mean when you said "it didn't work" about the Toy Boat thing? Like, none of them could say it, or they all could? Oh, wait, you won't have a chance to reply to this... That's sad. ;_; I'll miss our conversations! Actually... Get a Skype name. (www.skype.com) and talk to me on there! Meh username's flame_phoenix_rising! :3 Sh'yeah.
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: November 09, 2006 17:28 CST
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*looks are the screen blankly* why... *cries* argggghhh... so sad!! when you left the little cliffy, i was like. 'surely edward wont die... probably hoenhiem... alphons? hell, kill off havoc... but edward?!?!?!' *cries hysterically* ahem other that that... i loved this story... is it really over?? thats wat the other comments say... it better not be!!! *sigh* have any other projects in mind?? -bastard- hehe. funny. lol, yeah so guess what... i got the fma movie!!! hehe, its so good, better than watchin in on youtube. thank God for Borders...
| Reviewed By: Tamaria On: November 07, 2006 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My sister randomly introduced it to me, during the short that I got to read it. Even though I was cut off on some parts, I think it was really, really, interesting. Thanks for finally finishing! (I am Mesai's sister, Yay!)
| Reviewed By: Mesai On: November 07, 2006 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, some parts confused me but I got the overall meaning. I think...
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 18:29 CST
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Very nicly done, and now its over! TT.TT Since you're no longer distracting me mabye I should go write...Nah, I think I'll go look for another fic to read.
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 15:14 CST
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*gack... GACKGACKGACKdead* Yeah... I died... Sorry about that... I had to attend my funeral and such, no time to leave a review for last chapter. Love these chapters! So heart-wrenching, but that's the best part! A-hahahahaa Ed's going to come back alive. Naw, just kidding, I dunno what's happening. Is this the end? Huh. And since... You didn't say anything for me to reply to, I'll talk about fun words to say too. OHMIGAWSH. Try saying "Toy Boat" five times FAST. I have asked this of 20 people, and have proven that it physically impossible to say it correctly more than once. Or at least really really really really really really hard. And it gets annoying! Like, you'd think that you could at least say TOY BOAT correctly, but noooooo. It's always "Toy boat, toy boit, toy boy, AUGHGHGH F***." Yeah. That sums up what comes out of my mouth when I try. xDDD
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: October 29, 2006 23:19 CST
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the chapters are winding down!! i like the journel entry this chapter... its so true... this chapter was probably the best i'd have to say. well besides the first few that got me hooked in the first place... anyways lol... oh wait!! i forgot... i am angered by the cliff hanger.. well written... but still... i must know what happens!!! i really will kill myself... well not really... i'll just throw a ten-second tantrum like Ed. on the lighter side of things... i really did chuck my ps2... not good at all... it really doesnt help, hmmm the more i think about it i'm kinda like Ed... very impulsive... eh. i forgot but i think i remember seeing a ban on ff.net at my school!! yet they dont ban youtubE??? crazy education systems... *Sigh* they cant protect us from everything. ahahaha! you said bastard... that word entertains me... lmao, i'm weird... ya knw the word jimmy... timmy... and whore entertain me too... well ok... alot of words are cool.. kewl... hehe funny. *two year old moment over* btw i re-read ironic... and i kinda sniffled again... definitely cried the first time... *sigh* such good writers i happen to chance upon.
| Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 09:11 CST
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I think its from read or die. I'm basing this of preview I've read in the back of books or on anime DVD's my friends have. (I don't buy them either). $, I really need some. But since I don't, my friends and I have started monthly trips to borders and we really do just pick up manga from a shelf and read it at the cafe. I always feel kinda bad, so I make sure to buy a cookie or something too. Is this the last one? I can see it being either way, but once again the choice is yours. OH! I was driving home (from a Border's excurstion) and saw a bumber sticker that I thought was the best thing in the world and that you might like to: "Do not meddle in the affirs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup"
| Reviewed By: Uniasus (lazy bum) On: October 25, 2006 20:47 CDT
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A paper master is one who controls the paper of books, shaping it to her will to attack, defend, or if they wanted to, to dance with. I recieved a shiny present today. It was a wand with a sparkly purple stick end and shiny foil pom-pom, center piece, stuff. I'm rather fond of it, and if its possible my fond for shiny has now increased since art... As to Ed's discovery, a valley filled with flowers, another way out, or a stash of philiopher (sp?) stones. Those would be handy.
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: October 21, 2006 10:28 CDT
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3 or 4 chapters left?!?! argh i might kill myself *not really* but still, lol. yeah so i checked my ps2 this morning and it doesnt work... i tried... lol. senior art? fun stuff. i like turtles though hehe. hope you find ur paints! although you could always buy new ones. =] you got bit by a snake *supresses laughter* are you ok??? lol, it wasnt poisounous i'm sure... right??! i'm pretty sure it slithered away. and i always watched FMA on youtube, it works at school too! I'd always finish my job in a rush and then i'd start watching. actually... i would watch while i was working, hehe i fit all the different windows on one screen... it was niice. and yeah that ironic story was good... actually i might have to re-read it, but if its wat i remember it to be... i cried!! i think... probably... if its sad i cried
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 17:05 CDT
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DUDE! NO FAIR! THE COMMENT THING TOTALLY CUT OFF THE REST OF MY COMMENT! I'm too lazy to re-type it though. xDD
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 17:05 CDT
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AUGGHH! Cliff hanger of doom! DDDDD: Love the ending quote though. xDD
| Reviewed By: Misa92 On: October 16, 2006 20:19 CDT
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dude haha its all good, i'd probably make the same mistake, except i wouldnt notice for like 40 chapters. So by the time of like chapter 40, it'd still be chapter 1 haha. lol, Great chappy by the way! i cant believe this story is gonna end soon *cries hysterically* anyways, yeah i havent played to many games besides final fantasy (which i havent finished cuz my ps2 broke) but i'm planning too. ima wait till the new version of the playstation comes out, rather than buying a ps2. hehe, hope your art grade doesnt suffer too much. dont want you failing classes or your gonna have to go to your room missy! lol. jk. but anyways, i'm sorry your turtle died!!! i wish i had a turtle... p.s. sorry for intruding in other conversations (with phe) but i saw the episode where hughes died while i was at work, and i had to get up to leave, go to the bathroom, and i stayed there for like 15 minutes crying. *sigh* i did the same thing when ed died and some other sad parts. dont laugh! i'm an emotional person lol.
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:49 CDT
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I totally didn't comment on the story! @_@ I'm sorry! Only two things to say this time: Lawlz @ Hoenheim in a military uniform, and please stoppy with the cliffhangers! D: Every time you write a cliffhanger, an Ed sheds a tear. T_T
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:47 CDT
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You kidding? I totally sobbed when Dumbledore died for like ten minutes. I'm not embarrassed to admit it, Dumbledore was freaking awesome... And I did cry more for him than Hughes. xD;; Please don't hurt me. Wait a second... He PEPPERED the KIWI?! Wtf? It should be a LAW that the only thing you can put on fruit is sweet stuff. >_> It's just gross when my dad sits down to a bowl of... salted canteloupe. DDDx And sorry to burst in on your other conversation, but get KH2. I didn't even finish the first KH, I just got my brother to tell me the plot of KH and KH:CM and then I played KH2 and am now totally obsessed with Sora (who doesn't sound squeaky like he did in the first game). Lawlz.
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