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Reviewed By: myeternalanguishh On: October 05, 2013 05:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story. I love the pairing and you did a great job on the lemon. My only real complaint is Kagome's character. I don't think she was being fair to Kouga towards the end and they really didn't get enough airtime in the final chapter, or any at all actually. I think ending the story with Inuyasha kissing her and her just laughing it off was a mistake. It didn't really give the story closure. It left the story wide open without any real conclusion. There was no ending that tied it all together. I know you basically wrote this for practice but as a reader who was really enjoying this and loving your expressive writing, I was just disappointed. Still, it was a nice story although I felt pretty bad for Kouga through it and Kagome kind of came off as a bad person, or at least a bad person to be in a relationship with. |
Reviewed By: Sarah1986 On: February 03, 2011 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it's the 1st kouga/kagome i'v got to read and i find it nice to see him win this once.So all in all grate piece of work and will have to check out some of your others |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 05:57 EDT
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this is good, but it needs more. what does kikyou decide to do with kaede? do they kill naraku? does shippo get adopted and have lots of wolf friends and siblings to play with? does kagome get sent back to her own time/ and if she does what happens?
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Title: Awwww!
Reviewed By: Takuto-Koga-Kyo On: April 30, 2008 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN!!! I don't want it to end! That was the greatest fanfic I've ever read! Why oh why must the good come to an end?
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKK!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE DON'T END IT HERE!!!....I WANNA KNOW MORE!!!....it's sooo sad that kaede had to die...at least it was peacefully
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Title: an aLways sequel pLs!!!
Reviewed By: nauseOus_abbadOn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 11:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.,hey you rock!!! its been a couple of days since ive managed to finish your fan fic and im craving for more...pLs write a sequel...
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this take on Kagome/Koga relationship. I feel that you could make this into a sequel (if you already haven't.) Koga does deserve to be happy and Inuyasha has always hurt Kagome with his constant going to Kikyo (don't like the woman, glad she died, again.) Thanks for this great story.
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Title: EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: Samantha M. On: September 04, 2007 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had everything, action, adventure, romance, even a little bit of horror. Like I said, you should pursue a career as a author, you'd get it pretty good, this was a pretty long story, maybe long enough to be a novel?? Keep up the good work.
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Title: update!!
Reviewed By: update!! On: August 28, 2007 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story rocks! please update soon, cause every body dying to read the rest!
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Title: update!!
Reviewed By: update!! On: August 28, 2007 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story rocks! please update soon, cause everybody is waiting!!!!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 20:39 EDT
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well this is not really about the story i just wanted to say u are very smart!...u hate bush (the president):D i hate him too.....oh and i really like yer story to i read it on devientart ^_^
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Reviewed By: xevil_duckiex On: June 27, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I originally found this on fanfic.net but I don't have an account and being unknown was blocked. KagxKouga is one of my favorite pairings, but I have never encountered such a beautifully pieced fanfic! Not too fluffy, mushy or lemony. Having come across it last night, I was up 'til 4am because I couldn't pull my eyes away! I'd say you captured the characters traits and personalities pretty well and the details were perfect!! If Inuyasha was a shoujo rather than a shounen, this is what it would be like (...and if it was based on Kouga
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Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 23:39 EDT
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awesome story, I love the drama although it tears me up that inuyasha finally chose kagome and she's with kouga now.. it's kinda sad lol i dont want either of them to be sad lol update soon!
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Reviewed By: wackywisher18 On: June 15, 2007 16:24 EDT
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yeah, an update! Can't wait to see what's up next! It's sad Keade died, but at least she went peacefully. Great job!!
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Reviewed By: WolfPad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 00:20 EDT
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love it love it LOVE IT!!! Great job, the plot flows, the characterizations are perfect, and you have good grammar (always a good thing to have when writing)!!! I can't wait to read more, keep it up!
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