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"alone time" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 30, 2009 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
not a bad story i hope you continue it soon. Only thing really wrong that i see is that no matter how much in love they were they still would not use terms like dear or sweety or babe very much if at all. I think Akane will always be Ranmas tomboy, and Ranma will always be Akanes baka, they wold just use them in a teasing and possesive way instead of in an angery or a hurtful way.

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