| "There's Something So Special About Her" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Title: WOW UR REALLY GRATE THIS WAS AN AWSOME STORY AND U ALREADY HAVE A SEQUAEL!!! IM A FAN OF MOST OF UR STORYS! ok....so i only read 3 so far but give me a break u write long ass storys and i luv yah for that! (AS A WRITER!!!! (0.0) NO WRONG IDEAS PLEAS
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:46 CDT
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MWAHAHAHAHAHA ...im weired......(0.o)
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Reviewed By: crzy for ur fan-fic On: June 16, 2008 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this waz a very good and intresting story and ur a mean very mean cliffhangerss u better have a second story explaining her father and how kikyo gets her revenge that would be awesome if she went crazy...though...she was already a little off and then she finds out about her father dude why am i telling u how to write ur own story im sure u have ur making a compelling story chow now and hope u come and write even better and more dramatic storys cuz u have a lot of talent lookin foward to readin more of ur work!!!!!!!!!! chelsea lugo
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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! This is goin' onto one of my favorites. So far, I have like 4 of your stories as one of my fav'. Lol, you're amazingly talented. I hope you can write more stories because I know I'll miss this after I read the rest of your stories. Keep up the good work! =D
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! I love that song so much!!!!! It's one of my favorites!!! Also, great story. I've had it on my favorites for a few days now.
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Title: Continuation-of my longest review ever
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this is officaly the longest review I have ever writen yet...I have never had to go to a second thind to write on....o-well but like I was saying....I hope you have the next story coming up soon...and Miroku and Sango are going to be a couple....I so happy...those to are always suppose to be together.....so I have a question are you going to find some one for Sessy for the next story.....I hope he finds some one nice.....same with Naraku...this may be the only time ever say that but Naraku in this story desurves some one good....please say you have already started the other story....and thankyou for writeing this story...I was realy someing to make me write a review this long just think of that...hehe....ok...I'm done now...thanks again.....Nyuka......P.S. I remembers something when I was scoring you and its the reason I gave you and 9 on creativity.....I don't know why but this story realy reminded me of Nany mac fee...exept that it wasn't the Nany the Owner got with and they were his children....ok never mind this story is totaly original and I change my answer to a 10 ....so eggnor the scoring you got a ten it was just my stupened mind making connections....ok now I'm realy done....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:05 CDT
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Ok just a warning I have alot to say and I hope 4000 words is enoph....hehe.....I started reading this story because you suggested it from your other fic and I was all like I'll check it out, it sound like a good fic......I was sooooooooooo happy when I looked at all the chapters and the last once said end chapter befor I started reading it.....because what I realy love to do if find realy great fic's that are already finished...then I don't have to suffer when the story stops and I waiting for the next chapter update.....I have to be honest with you I am not the best reader in the world and I very slow at reading but I will say this when I started reading this I read it for almost three days strait exsept to get a phew hours of sleep and my family so cruly draged me a way to go to the movie theators...*sigh*.....I don't want to sound like a perfectionist but it realy started to bugg me when I was reading in meny places that it would make sence for and 'in' there was instead a 'on'...I don't know if that was your intention but I'll tell you after reading 61 chapters of that it was starting to drive me crazy....hehe...............ya know I don't hate Kikyo from the series, I realy feel sorry for her but its the fic that I read that realy make me hate her.....I would say about 95% of Inuyasha viewers hate her and the other 5% don't hate her because they have pity for her....what do ya think of them numbers?.....hehe......I thought it was koo that you made Naraku the Hero...he realy doesn't get to be the hero that often....mostly because he is the Ideal bad guy....hehe....with Kikyo by his side.......ya know what I notice is that you made the real brother of the character there cousin....did you do that on perpous...well of course you did your the author any ways......I realy want you to know what this fic did to me I was paranoied for the charaters....*sigh*...I realy get caught up when I'm read fic's....at points I was laughing, and sighing, and crying, and heart broken, and nerves, and peranoied, and times I felt like shoting the Author...no affence I mind you......like after got hit by that car....How could you do that to my heart I thought I was going to die when You had Kagomes dream sequence....I was like no, no this can not me he can't be dead it just wasn't right.....I was ten seconds from turning of my computer and erasing this story form my fav's, just out of pur pain for Kagome and Inuyasha, the reason I didn't was cause I scroled down to check on how meny chapers were life and since there was to meny for him to have died and not enoph for me to call it quits I dissided to keep read....and boy I was glad I did....I was glad that Inuyasha didn't die but was in a coma insted, but ooooowwwww...Things just seemed to get worse befor they got better and I was so angree...there as even a moment that I had to get up and pace my room and say out loud to my self all the stuff Kikyo was about to get away with...(this was after she told the doctors to unplug Inuyasha and she had the Shikon Jewel and was heading to her fathers lawers office).....I was so grrrrrrrrr angree......I also thought my hear stoped when Inuyasha got hit by the car right after he said thouse thing to Kagome.....O my gosh I was...I don't know I had alot of thing going on in my head....soooooooo did Myoga and Keida (I don't think I speld those right o-well) get their Jobs back??....I shur if they hadn't already then they soon would...XD....Ya know about the sequal are ya going to be writeing soon since its summer or have you already started ....I'll check it out....that was tarible how could you do that right at the end of the story that is soooooo not koo....Inuyasha and Kagome need to be married and her father is alive and needs to go talk to her....how could he fake his own death like that....and didn't in the begging you say that he died 3 years ago and that they just found his will...ya might want to fix that...hehe....I don't know if I can fit the rest. |
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover41000031AKA rad coco On: May 16, 2007 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story a wile ago, and i absolutly loved it! please mail me when you write the reveiw, my e-mail tinkerbelljr10@comcast.net thnkx ttyl Inuyashalover41000031AKA rad coco
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 22:46 CDT
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So good so far but at the end of chapter 26 you said that Yuka is married with Hojo and in an earlier chapter you said it was Ayumi... Well I'm not done reading yet... I'm having so much fun with this fic =)
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Title: update please!
Reviewed By: heather_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i love the story and all but this is killing me to have to wait this long for the next chapters i am also reading open your eyes and suddenly love and i read a few others but i like suddenly love and there's something so special about her i know you have schoool and everything but its the march break can you update there's something so special about her and suddenly love and if you have time open your eyes i check mostly every day to see if any of thoose three have been updated but usually none thanks for the cool stories to read i really enjoy them:) yah if you could do a squel that would be soooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks again bye!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!!!!! i was in tears when i thought inuyasha was dead!!!! thank god he wasnt!!!! and dam keep writing PLEASE you have to T-T n ha YES kikyo in jail hahahahahahahaha
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Title: Cheesiest Smile
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the not ending so much that I couldn't stop grinning if I wanted to...lolz...it made my heart soar so high! Can't wait for the summer and awesome job making Kikyo pay badly! Maybe in the sequel she can figure a way to break out of jail and get revenge on the happy couple!... Just a thought...tee-hee* So evil! Hey AWESOME JOB again times a million and you should recommend my newest creation to your readers... just a thought, that's after you check it out yourself thought- okay I'm rambling again and like I said the sequel would hold so many things and I hope your arm gets better with therapy! Much love!
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Title: I FRIKIN LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol love da kids they were on point!!! lol and inuyasha is a ditz..wow well love the story please update soon!
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kikyo~Must~Die On: January 28, 2007 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN"T WAIT TILL SUMMER!!!!!!! I"ve looooove this story and i know i'm gonna love the sequel, I love the twist you put at the end, totally awsome, start writing the sequel sooooon pleeease *Puppy dog eyes* I love all your storys and i can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE LAST CHAPTER!!! I ALMOST CRIED! THANKS FOR REVIEWING MY STORY TOO! MAKE THE SEQULE COME QUICK!!!
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Title: Amazzzing
Reviewed By: BrittBratt On: January 23, 2007 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant tell you how happy that chapter made me lol im so glad he woke up!!!! Update soon please =]
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