| "There's Something So Special About Her" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kiky!-hoe~Must~DIE On: November 03, 2006 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!! I've been waiting for some one to find out about that bitch, update really ssooon
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Title: Oh... Okay
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I thought that Ayame was older since she definitely acts more mature than Kagome...lolz, then maybe Kouga and Ayame would be more of a perfect match... KIKYO CAUGHT RED HANDED! and it'll be better if Kagome had a silent non flash camera to take a picture! I hope InuYasha believes Kags and they start working together to catch Kikyo and break her up with InuYasha... How in the world would Rin and Shippo break Kouga away from Kagome, would they pull a Hojo? lolz, I want to see more of what Miroku does with Sango in her room and I reallly want them to get caught so InuYasha can just foil another part of Kikyo's plan without knowing it...man the face he'll make and the things he say to Miroku? I wonder if Sango would be grounded for a new millenium before Kags works her magic on him to accept Miro again as a friend... I'm really being intuitive about what's gonna happen but they're just harmless questions... Great job on the last chapter... It's MUY BUENO that you're getting better and I'm TRES TRES CONTENTE that you'll be writing another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome313(nsi) On: November 02, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She saw them!!! Plz tell me she'll confront inu n then they'll b together forever!!! =D I hope Inu goes with kags, n soon!!! Love the update, so that means.....hurry n update!!! =) I'll b waiting!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA! Wish Kagome had a camara! hehe kissing Naraku eeeewwwwwyyyyyy!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK-YOU!!!!!!! Evil Kikyo gets caught,yay! Will Yash believe her though? I love it.... Update soon please,PLEASE!!!!! Your very devoted fan-Deirdre
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Title: You
Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You evil cliff hanging-------person! You quit it! You're mean! I'm so addicted to this fic! You just update soon please,please,pretty please? Totally love your fics! -Deirdre
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Giddy school girl dance* oooOOOO! I wonder what's going to happen nneexxxtttttt! HEhe! yea Sorry I've been drinking alot of pepsi.........0.o I love this story *sigh* I do kinda feel sorry for kouga tho.... :( Inuyasha is being an ass for pulling kagome around like that!! FOR SHAME!!!!!!! mkae hims stop lmao! ~Sadie~
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Title: On A Path To Success
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's not much I can say without sounding redundant...lolz, Super great chapter and I'm loving the new ideas that are springing up. It makes it seem like this story is going to last forever with all the new problems that keep arising! Even though I hate the bitch, Kikyo is finally taking more action and a clear distinctive plan is starting to form within the plot...OMG What the hell would Inuyasha say as his decision about Kagome? What would Kouga think now and why does it always seem that he walks in on them but stays in denial? Poor stupid Kouga, will Ayame be the one for him even though she's like Kagome's age and friend in this fic? I miss hearing about my favorite mini characters- RIN and SHIPPO- they need to come back to reek more havoc and destruction in their plan to make Kagome their new mother. LOLZ, When is Sesshy going to take action in this fic? He can't be left out from all this drama when everyone else is involved, right? Maybe he can shack up with Kagura and end up making her tell the truth to Inuyasha? Wow, I said way too much and I tried to shut up too...lolz, well I got most of my questions and thoughts out and I hope it helps with the writing process... Get better soon and I'm glad to see you're not straining yourself by attending classes, by chillaxing you get better faster! Great job with this chapter and I think it's amazing that even with you being ill that you can push out so many drama filled chapters! Can't wait for next update! Your #1 FAN- StephanieRoxUrSox
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fogot kikyo n kags are sis x_x!! I luv it. Jus when they were 'bout to kiss kikyo comes in!! argh! And she's gonna date kouga...and plz dont tell me he's gonna fire her...no no NO!!! Plz? I luv the update^__^ So.....UPDATE SOON!^__^
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Title: First Things First
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I hope your stress levels calm down soon and you get some more happiness in your life within your next week! Second I think if you're stressed and produced this many good ideas... makes you such a frigging awesome writer or something like that because the ideas still have me way freaked out! KAGOME SAYING YES? AND TO KOUGA!? KIKYO AND INUYASHA ACTUALLY HAVING A CHANCE TO BE TOGETHER?! Man those two things I never saw coming but I couldn't have been more happy to see them! I'm rather speechless and I can't wait for the next chapter! HAPPY HALLOWEEN! Get enough rest or enjoy all the rest that you can!
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Reviewed By: I hate kikyo On: October 29, 2006 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo is s bitch, thats al i'm going to asy
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
It's getting good! Can't wait for the next update, and I was wondering... I thought Kikyo didn't know who her halfsister was? I mean it's obvious that it was Kagome, but yeah, is that a mistake in the text or something?
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Reviewed By: lil6ter On: October 28, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story, but your grammar is atrocious. I have been following your other storys as well, but this is the first time that I decided to say anything. As for my critique, all I can say is that I can find lots of sentences that don't make any sense what so ever. And if you would like me to, I would be more then happy to do so, that way you could make your story even better. Let me just say for a start, that it looks like you never re-read what you have written, because then you might find these mistakes. Here is a very minor one that keeps reappearing. You constantly use the word on instead of in. for example, when Inuyasha says, "No more complains! now you three go and clean up the mess on the living room!" in chapter two.(I underlined the mistake) I will stop there because I do not know if you would like for me to continue or not. I will say thought that I am entranced by the story and cant wait to find out what happens next. I hope that in the end Inuyahsa will dump Kikyo for Kagome. Keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAn PLEASE have a Kagome and Kikyo fight, have Kagome give her a punch just for me! lol great job keep it up ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A cliffy?!? Why oh why oh WHY!!! I think the baby is Naraku's child, right? That kikyou is a evil little bitch! And Inuyasha!! He wants kags n kikyou? I say dump the bitch n take kagome, yea but she kissed kouga. That's more drama. I'll be waiting for an update!! And the for including my fic in your story^__^....
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