| "Killer Porn" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
quite a few seemlingly unneeded curswords, but aside from that this was a nicely written story. The grammar was a little off... (depending on where you're from...). I'm sorry for a short review,I cannot very well write a review on a story such as this ^^;
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Title: More, please!
Reviewed By: mugi-the-eep [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 11:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great!! I hope you do more! ^_^ mugi
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Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. I love this. I am not sure if this was supposed to be a one-shot or not, cuz I forgot to check, but I would really like it if you continued it and made it into a longer story because it is very enjoyable.
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