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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 08:15 EDT
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So confused! It's getting good, but I am confused about Vincent. I'm have afriad that he would turn out to be Hojo. And that can't happen right? Will Kagome really die if she consumates her relationship with Vincent?
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Reviewed By: Kins-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 05:17 EDT
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This is amazing. At first I was like "Aww, Vincent's cute." I was stil InuxKag all the way, but i thought Vincent wasn't so bad. after reading part two he seems kind of possesive and sex-crazy. i now despise him. inuyasha's possesive but vincent seems like the type of guy who would get jealous and like turn abusive towards his girlfriend over it. the whole time i read this i kept replaying this Busted song and it kind of fits where the story could go. it got me thinking about how inu is gonna get kag back... he is gonna get her back right? and everyone in the story who gets pissed at kagome for leaving, who would honestly sit there and let there husband or boyfriend come ut o them and be like "i didnt cheat on you" and just believe them? i know you should trust ur partner, but after all the shit with kikyo, doesn't kagome have all the right NOT to believe Inuyasha and just to leave? i guess her just leaving wasn't great, like she should have said something to Inuyasha at least saying it's over, even if it hurt, but she really had all the right to assume that it was just like the situation she was in b4.
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Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: so confused On: August 15, 2007 01:55 EDT
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After all this time, pain, and heartache, all he can do is stare at her "beautiful" face and take in her scent and practically beg for her attention? I know he is a dog demon and is loyal, but my goodness can he man up just a bit. She is no "angel," and its about time he realized it and stpped treating her like one. The reason why Kagome is so callous with his feelings is that he never tells her about herself. So even when he is broken she goes on flaunting around like her bratty behavior is "cute," when it's not. She tells everyone a 1/4 truth, gains their sympathy and goes on reconfirming her childish behavior, and after 6 years, its getting quite annoying. I know they will get back together, but I wouldn't be upset if he told her to find a pointy object and sit on it because she doesn't deserve him. She treats him like a pebble in her shoe, and I don't understand why she makes a point not to hurt others, but has no qualms about treating him like crap. I don't expect him to yell and call her out of her name, because I have little respect for those who do that, but he should tell her how he feels, how she made him feel, and stop putting her feelings before his own because she has made it clear that she doesn't deserve or want his love. I really don't like how he again is plannig to "win" her back, because after 506 years, she is no longer a prize. He is the prize and she should have to earn his love and trust back, because she has taken his love and devotion to her for granted. It would do her well to receieve a wedding gift from him congratulating her on her marriage, instead of his constant declarations of love so that she can finally understand that she can no longer look upon him as a reserve for when she catches her first clue. He is a person worthy of love, trust, and support too, and its sad to watch him throw himself at a person who doesn't believe he deserves it. It's Kikyo all over again. Despite my dislike of the situation and Kagome's behavior, I do enjoy your writing so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally they met again... sorry to say but vincent really has to go... kagome should really listen to her heart... she still loves inuyasha but she's scared to face it and him... i think kiyoshi should give himself a break away from alexandria... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:02 EDT
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NOW,it's getting really intresting. This is about to get chaotic, ha, Kagome didn't admit she didn't love Inuyasha because it's not true. I do feel sorry for Vince he seems like a nice guy but Oh Well, he's gotta go. Seems like Alexandra is going to have some unspoken competition with Victoria but is that she really doesn't like Kioyishi or maybe she sees him as the one that could get in her heart. Oh so many questions, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:51 EDT
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ahhhh! its too short... i was waiting for someone to get their ass kicked. o well, maybe next chap. dont want to sound insensitive but vincent needs a beat down. hes pissing me off. =) please have the next one up be tomorrow. cant wait. good story though.
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 21:27 EDT
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:] Thanks for the clear up. And come on Kiyoshi and InuYasha, go get your girls!! .^-^. Lol. *feels bad the the review is so short* Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:03 EDT
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okay.. I'm waiting for the scene in which Kagome gets the serious verbal butt kicking that she really needs. I'm still ticked at her for being her usual cowardly self and running away every time something doesn't go her way but demands like a spoiled princess for her to explain/defend herself if the roles were reversed. Grrrr... you have me very hooked and scolding my Kagome plushie!! Poor Inuyasha!! I really hope he can make Kagome see clearly all the immeasurable toremt she has put him through. So I await eagerly for the next chapter.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice part 2. But when oh when are they going to get together. I feel bad for Vincent, I hope he's okay when they break up. So is Alexander maybe jealous of Victoria? Hummm.... Maybe they will get together soon!
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Reviewed By: MizuhoK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!!! I started this story last night, and now I'm just plain addicted to it!!! Seriously, I'm at Chapter 12, and love it! Keep it up, and I can't wait to finish it! Don't ever give up writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Break his heart, whoever this "Vincent" guy is... Don't be so stubborn Kagomeeee go to InuYasha!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Timmy23 On: August 14, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and lets get Vincent out already she doen't even love him justusing him to get over yash. Update soon
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:02 EDT
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Sorry for the double post...damn computer...great story. Weee....-randomness terminated-
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I have to say this insn't your typical 'Kagome forgets InuYasha and then they meet and fall in love again...' story line. I just love all the emotion and sense of never knowing what will happen next. The whole fiance threw me for a loop, nearly broke my heart...*sniffles* Lawl. Great story though. They have a big family...kinda hard to remember who is whos child at times. Heh. The baby's first word thing was cute, can't think that Sesshoumaru would be too happy 'bout that. ^^. Cliffy...so suspenceful. Once more, the story is written beautifully and all.
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I have to say this insn't your typical 'Kagome forgets InuYasha and then they meet and fall in love again...' story line. I just love all the emotion and sense of never knowing what will happen next. The whole fiance threw me for a loop, nearly broke my heart...*sniffles* Lawl. Great story though. They have a big family...kinda hard to remember who is whos child at times. Heh. The baby's first word thing was cute, can't think that Sesshoumaru would be too happy 'bout that. ^^. Cliffy...so suspenceful. Once more, the story is written beautifully and all.
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