| "From a Raven to a Dove" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Temari252 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story!!!!!! *megan b*
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
This sounds interesting. You should, most definitely, continue on with this. Please, update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Arbitrary Doom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 04:49 CDT
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.......its good so far.....i like it......but......the other reviewers confuse me.......XP!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
though i would call this more a prolougue more than a chapter i still think it is very interesting and you should keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Queen of Black On: August 20, 2006 16:14 CDT
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NO, I take that back, this is a way better idea- since that other dude said it wasn't original. FIND SOME WAY TO MAKE IT A SLASH (you know, homo) XD, that would REALLY prove your writing skill. Or you can just ask Patrick for ideas for the slash... I'm sure he would know... XD... ok, major overuse of 'XD'.
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Title: Don't do it.
Reviewed By: Dr.BirthControl Mishap On: August 20, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't take your pent up anger about you miscarriage out on me! it's not my fault you thought the "Birth be gone" Was a vitamin C tablet, It's a very popular style for Pill labels now adays! Sincerely Doctor Robert J. Birthcontrol
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Reviewed By: Queen of Black On: August 20, 2006 16:03 CDT
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Sorry, *about
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Reviewed By: Queen of Black On: August 20, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... since I've never seen this show or read the book or whatever at all... I have no idea what you're talking about. Oh well, good job... at least you know when to start a new paragraph (among other things), and spelling and grammar was good. But since I have no idea what the hell you're talking aout- I couldn't exactly 'enjoy' it... maybe you should turn it into a lemon XD ... (well, it's an idea). I mean, I'm sure Megan's read enough lemons to know how to write one. XD But good job.
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Reviewed By: NaruxSas On: August 20, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MARRY ME!
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Reviewed By: Pedophilia On: August 20, 2006 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason I gave you a 2 in creativity is because I'm sure there are MANY Naru/Sas Fanfics. So not really creative. Writing was quite good so I gave you 10 in Spelling and Grammar, Style was okay, Enjoyment was low because I'm not esxactly into these sorts of literature and you forced me into it. Overall it was pretty well done, But just because of your writing skills, not the idea.
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Title: $up@
Reviewed By: Anmelvr On: August 20, 2006 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
L!k3 †0†a||y 1337!! LOLZ! ! †0†@lly LUV IT! K33p !t Up!
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Title: >.< Nice Work >.
Reviewed By: SammyMeggysFriend On: August 20, 2006 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it so much I bow to you for writing such great storys *Bow,Bow* Well I can't think and anything else right now so bye!! :D
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Title: >.< Nice Work >.
Reviewed By: SamSamMeggysFriend On: August 20, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol I liked your story it was very Naruto-ish Lol Your sooo good at writing storys about ANYTHING! lol I bow to you *Bow,Bow* Lol Well I can't think of anthing else to write so yeah well bye!!!!
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